Bas khawab he main milna hai

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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** Bas khawab he main milna hai Mainay arzoo ya kab kee thee?

Mray gham ke aab khabar na hoo
Taray dill pay koyee asar na hoo
Main rahoo mareezay dill saada
Tari chahtoo key ya marzi thee

Tujahay rah koyee aur chalana tha
Mari arzoor bas tu he rahee
Ya faslay paray hain joo
Ya rastoon ke marzi thee

Yaad hain wo shab o rooz
Jo hum nay guzaray ak sath
Tari ankha jaab thee jhookee howee
Wo he mari sari haiyat thee

Tujahay panay kee arzoor hai
Tujahay khoonay kee baat kab kee thee**

by Dilsay

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humm ... nice

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bohat achi hai :)
Thanks for sharing ...

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Thanks alot Azad jee and WG ....

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zabardast:k:

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Buhat Khoob:flower1:…

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bohut khoob:k::k:

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nice but beher ka khayal rakhein toa aur behtar ho sakti hai.

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zabardast

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Wow :k::k: bohat khoobsurut hai ..:slight_smile:

Thanx 4 sharing

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Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww very nice + beautiful bhai jaaaaaaaan :slight_smile: :flower2:

keep it up :slight_smile:

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wonderful

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simply beautiful :flower1:

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Nice one!:k:

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Thanks every one....

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Bas khawab he main milna hai
shukar karin khawab main hi milna tu horaha hai ;)

good one

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i know im making fun with each guppie in their poetry but plz dont mind

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*Originally posted by Nazam: *
i know im making fun with each guppie in their poetry but plz dont mind
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if you feel that way thn why are you doing it.... anyway thanks for your comments....

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Re: Bas khawab he main milna hai

Nice one Dilsay :k:
PS:- Maheen kee advice ko dhiyaan mein rakhna aaeenda :slight_smile:

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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *

if you feel that way thn why are you doing it.... anyway thanks for your comments....
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Adaat sey majbor ;) i like fun :p