Bas Ek Sher

aabla_pa · March 15, 2007, 10:00am

Dedicated 2 those who cant read long poems

phir us k baad tanhaee parakhti hai musaafir ko
jahan tak roshni hai apna saaya sath deta hai

ashi2007 · March 15, 2007, 10:03am

Re: Bas Ek Sher

dats more like it

raat hui jab shamm ke baad
teri yaad ai her baat ke baad

khamosh rah ker bi dekha hum ne
teri awaz ai her saans ke baad

aminas · March 15, 2007, 10:04am

Re: Bas Ek Sher

^ very nice

aminas · March 15, 2007, 10:05am

Re: Bas Ek Sher

my fav;
uthti nahi nigah kissi or ki taraf
paaband kar gayi kissi ki nazar mujhe

aabla_pa · March 15, 2007, 10:08am

Re: Bas Ek Sher

[QUOTE]
khamosh rah ker bi dekha hum ne
teri awaz ai her saans ke baad
[/QUOTE]

[QUOTE]
uthti nahi nigah kissi or ki taraf
paaband kar gayi kissi ki nazar mujhe
[/QUOTE]

Bhot Khoob. :)

ashi2007 · March 15, 2007, 10:10am

Re: Bas Ek Sher

dil main sanam ki surat ankhon main ashki de
mere khuda mujey tu ek aur zindagi de

So saal main sanam ki ankhon main doob jaon
so saal aur hoon tu us ko gale lagaon

So saal phir milan ki duniya nai nai de
mere khuda mujey tu ek aur zindagi de

oh im soooo good

aabla_pa · March 15, 2007, 10:14am

Re: Bas Ek Sher

Yeah U R Gr8 Stuff. :k:

aabla_pa · March 15, 2007, 10:16am

Re: Bas Ek Sher

tu mila hai to ye ehsaas hua hai mujhko
ye meri umr mohabbat k liye thori hai

ek zara sa gham-e-doraa'n ka bhi hai haq hai jis par
mein ne wo saans bhi tere liye rakh chori hai

tujha pay ho jaonga qurbaan, tujhay chaahon ga
mein to mar kar bhi meri jaan tujhay chaahon ga

ashi2007 · March 15, 2007, 11:09am

Re: Bas Ek Sher

nice one

pk786 · March 15, 2007, 11:15am

Re: Bas Ek Sher

all the poems shairs and songs are lovely :)

moonmine · March 15, 2007, 4:16pm

Re: Bas Ek Sher

so sweet....

SJ · March 15, 2007, 5:48pm

Re: Bas Ek Sher

insan mukkumal tu apna bhi nahin hotaa
us nay likha hai mein faqat tumhare hon

aabla_pa · March 15, 2007, 6:43pm

Re: Bas Ek Sher

[QUOTE]
insan mukkumal tu apna bhi nahin hotaa
us nay likha hai mein faqat tumhare hon
[/QUOTE]

NICE

bay-mehri-e-dunya ka gila hai tere lab par
ab kaisay bataoon tujhay, mein bhi nahi tera :(

umer.ashraf · March 15, 2007, 7:33pm

Re: Bas Ek Sher

:(
Mujhe gilah tujh se nahin, taqdeer se hay
ke koi to humrahi, mere saath bhi hota

aabla_pa · March 15, 2007, 7:54pm

Re: Bas Ek Sher

Umar saab. Bhot KhooB

mein ne aghaaz say anjaam-e-safar jaana hai
sabko do chaar qadam chal k theher jaana hai

jaanay waalay ko na roko k bharam reh jaey
tum pukaaro bhi to kab usko theher jana hai