barson ke intezaar ka anjaam likh diya

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Jhanjharewali April 22, 2007, 2:30pm 1

barson ke intezaar ka anjaam likh diya
kagaz pe shaam kaat ke , phir shaam likh diya

bikhri padee theen tuut ke kaliyaan zameen par
tarteeb de ke meine tera naam likh diya

asaa nahi thi tark-e-muhabbat ki daastaa
do ansuon ne aakhiri paighaam likh diya

Allah! zindagi se kahan tak nibhaun mei?
us bewafaa ke saath mera naam likh diya!

taqseem ho rahi thi Khudaai ki ne’matein
ik ishq bach gaya so mere naam likh diya

‘Kaesar’ kisi ki den hei ye shairi meri
uski ghazal pe kisne mera naam likh diya

aabla_pa April 22, 2007, 3:28pm 2

Re: barson ke intezaar ka anjaam likh diya

Bhot achi poem hai :k:

deep_ocean April 23, 2007, 5:10am 3

Re: barson ke intezaar ka anjaam likh diya

hanibal April 23, 2007, 9:56am 4

Re: barson ke intezaar ka anjaam likh diya

[QUOTE]
asaa nahi thi tark-e-muhabbat ki daastaa
do ansuon ne aakhiri paighaam likh diya
[/QUOTE]

Nice achi ghazal hay, khas tor per yeh shair

Asma_Farhan April 23, 2007, 10:50am 5

Re: barson ke intezaar ka anjaam likh diya

Superb! :k:
Last shair to bohat hi acha hai.

Shab-e-Hijar April 23, 2007, 5:39pm 6

Re: barson ke intezaar ka anjaam likh diya

good 1 :k:

EEMAAN April 23, 2007, 6:12pm 7

Re: barson ke intezaar ka anjaam likh diya

VERY NICE..

Addie April 26, 2007, 9:15am 8

Re: barson ke intezaar ka anjaam likh diya

nice

Jhanjharewali April 26, 2007, 11:09am 9

Re: barson ke intezaar ka anjaam likh diya

thank u doston.

Aqls April 27, 2007, 10:06am 10

Re: barson ke intezaar ka anjaam likh diya

zabardast

Jhanjharewali April 28, 2007, 11:21am 11

Re: barson ke intezaar ka anjaam likh diya

thank u doston!

SunnyBoy April 28, 2007, 11:44am 12

Re: barson ke intezaar ka anjaam likh diya

nice :k: