BARRA PUR KHATAR HAI YE SAFAR...

Shazia_Arif · March 5, 2011, 5:17pm

barra pur khatar hai ye safar,yahan qadam qadam pe srab hai
koi nafraton se bhara hua,kahin ishq lab labaab hai

jo aya munh main keh dia,sab log dhak se reh gaye
jahan baat karna muhaal ho,wahan ag-hi b azab hai

dil-e-be karan sambhal zara,ye paich-o-kham hain zindagi k
kahin diya b ankhain chundhya de,kahi sooraj b mahtab hai

meri zindagi ki kitab to,hai warq warq khuli hui
jo chaho iss pe likh do,yahan har tehreer nasab hai

kuch be-sabab khwahishain,sir ubhare thin kharri
inn ka sir kuchal dia,ye har sawal ka jawab hai

mene sab kashtian jala din or tanha kharra hun sahil pe
kuch main tha dooba dooba sa,kuch samne gardab hai…

Amal · March 5, 2011, 6:16pm

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barra pur khatar hai ye safar,yahan qadam qadam pe srab hai
koi nafraton se bhara hua,kahin ishq lab labaab hai

jo aya munh main keh dia,sab log dhak se reh gaye
jahan baat karna muhaal ho,wahan ag-hi b azab hai

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meri zindagi ki kitab to,hai warq warq khuli hui
jo chaho iss pe likh do,yahan har tehreer nasab hai

kuch be-sabab khwahishain,sir ubhare thin kharri
inn ka sir kuchal dia,ye har sawal ka jawab hai

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Wah Shazia Ji…bohat achi ghazal tehreer ki hey aap ney… :k: …

Nisaab

Shazia_Arif · March 5, 2011, 6:19pm

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barri islah ki

Amal · March 5, 2011, 6:23pm

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MeiN pehley apni islaah to karwa looN

Shazia_Arif · March 5, 2011, 6:38pm

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toh meri poem main faraz samajh k luch fry kar dia

Amal · March 5, 2011, 6:44pm

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IS · March 5, 2011, 8:37pm

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mujh se is terha kyo nai likhi jati poetry

v nice keet it up matlb aino kidre ocha rakhna

_Masoom_Muskaan · March 5, 2011, 8:38pm

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shazia baji mushkil mushkil words ke meaning b batain

_Masoom_Muskaan · March 5, 2011, 8:38pm

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kio ke u ke paas mind nai hai

Innocent_Smile · March 5, 2011, 8:41pm

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amazing. i m speechless.
really mujy nai pata tha ke humary pas itni zabardast shaii’ra mojood hain!
is pe dene ke liye comments main jo words honay chahiye wo yaqeenan mere pas nai hain. bas itna keh sakti hon. is ka aik aik lafz dil ko choo gaya.

Amal · March 5, 2011, 8:43pm

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Shazia ji ko saath aek Hajmoola ki sheeshi bhi dey deiN…

Innocent_Smile · March 5, 2011, 8:45pm

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koi kaam ap khud bhi kar lain

Innocent_Smile · March 5, 2011, 9:36pm

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tumhay dictionary hi na kharid dain

Shazia_Arif · March 6, 2011, 4:55am

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paen itni tareef na karain,mere maghroor hone main 5 min reh gay hain
kinna ku ucha???jan dyo paen

Shazia_Arif · March 6, 2011, 4:56am

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han chanda next time likha karun gi jab mujhe b pata chal jaye ga to

Shazia_Arif · March 6, 2011, 4:58am

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hai mind..wese tum mind kise kehti ho???shfkdjhryutierjscn ko???han ye to mere pas b nai

Shazia_Arif · March 6, 2011, 5:00am

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thanx for the compliment ab plz mere pas autograph na lene a jana mene nai dena,pehle hamara donga wapis karo phir dun gi

Shazia_Arif · March 6, 2011, 5:02am

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nai main adi hun tareef ki so hazam kar lun gi

Shazia_Arif · March 6, 2011, 5:03am

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han kerte hain na…logon ki motrain…kharab

Shazia_Arif · March 6, 2011, 5:05am

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na hath uthao itna bura maan jati hai bachi iss se kaam chala lo