Barish ... ab ke baras

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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aik taaza nazm kahi thee :slight_smile: aap loago k liay pesh hai ..

suno , ab ke baras
barkha ki rut
pichlay baras se
kuch juda lagti thi mujhko

guzishta saal teri yaad k aansu
samaanay se chupanay ke liay
baarish meri aankho ne orhi thee

magar ab ke baras
aalam kuch aisa tha
ke har ik boond
dil ke aainay se aks tera
qutra qutra
nuqta nuqta
dho rahee thee

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Re: Barish … ab ke baras

^^Beautiful…:k:

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Re: Barish … ab ke baras

ahsan225, bohat umda poem hey :k: very hi good :slight_smile:

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Re: Barish ... ab ke baras

Wow Buhat achii poem hay , thanks for sharing:-)

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Re: Barish ... ab ke baras

hasla afzaai ka bohat bohat shukriya :)

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Re: Barish ... ab ke baras

Barishoon kay mosam main achi nazam kahi aap nay

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Re: Barish … ab ke baras

Ek behtareen nazm…flow mein kam hi koi nazm nazar aati hai yahaaN.
Welldone :k:
(sirf ek jaga flow break hua hai as I’ve mentioned above)

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Re: Barish ... ab ke baras

BOhat khoOb...

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Re: Barish ... ab ke baras

its so lovely....

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Re: Barish ... ab ke baras

aap sab ki apreciation ka bohat bohat shukriya :)

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Re: Barish … ab ke baras

very nice :k:

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Re: Barish ... ab ke baras

magar ab ke baras
aalam kuch aisa tha
ke har ik boond
dil ke aainay se aks tera
qutra qutra
nuqta nuqta
dho rahee thee
So felling better then B4
Achi kawish hy