funkar to dekhay, nahi dekha tere jaisa
iqraar bhi kartay ho inkaar k jaisa
hum ye janay k jaan gaye hain tujh ko
tera to aks bhi hota hai bar-aks k jaisa
funkar to dekhay, nahi dekha tere jaisa
iqraar bhi kartay ho inkaar k jaisa
hum ye janay k jaan gaye hain tujh ko
tera to aks bhi hota hai bar-aks k jaisa
Re: Bar-aks k jaisa
Nice shair.. Bar aks ki jagah Pas e Deewar kaisa rahe ga for qafia?
Re: Bar-aks k jaisa
Pas e Deewar bhi theek hai
Re: Bar-aks k jaisa
waah...aapkii koshish achchhii hai magar aapko zaraa saa zabaan kii taraf dhyaan denaa chahaiye, merii Haqeer raaye meN...apne kalaam meN bahtarii laane ke liye aisaa zaroorii hai k zabaan o bayaan bahtar ho...shaa'irii kii yeh ek Khaas zaroorat hai! :) iske baGahir kalaam men nikhaar nahiiN aataa! :(
Re: Bar-aks k jaisa
apki murad shaystgi hai, ya smoothness ?
Re: Bar-aks k jaisa
apki murad shaystgi hai, ya smoothness ?
kia matlab? samjhaa nahiiN...sachchii, aapkii baat samajh shareef meN nahiiN aayii! :(
Re: Bar-aks k jaisa
kia matlab? samjhaa nahiiN...sachchii, aapkii baat samajh shareef meN nahiiN aayii! :(
zuban o bayan se kia muraad hai aapki