Bar-aks k jaisa

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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funkar to dekhay, nahi dekha tere jaisa
iqraar bhi kartay ho inkaar k jaisa

hum ye janay k jaan gaye hain tujh ko
tera to aks bhi hota hai bar-aks k jaisa

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Re: Bar-aks k jaisa

Nice shair.. Bar aks ki jagah Pas e Deewar kaisa rahe ga for qafia?

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Re: Bar-aks k jaisa

Pas e Deewar bhi theek hai

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Re: Bar-aks k jaisa

waah…aapkii koshish achchhii hai magar aapko zaraa saa zabaan kii taraf dhyaan denaa chahaiye, merii Haqeer raaye meN…apne kalaam meN bahtarii laane ke liye aisaa zaroorii hai k zabaan o bayaan bahtar ho…shaa’irii kii yeh ek Khaas zaroorat hai! :slight_smile: iske baGahir kalaam men nikhaar nahiiN aataa! :frowning:

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Re: Bar-aks k jaisa

apki murad shaystgi hai, ya smoothness ?

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Re: Bar-aks k jaisa

kia matlab? samjhaa nahiiN…sachchii, aapkii baat samajh shareef meN nahiiN aayii! :frowning:

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Re: Bar-aks k jaisa

zuban o bayan se kia muraad hai aapki