BANT LETE HEN...

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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chalo aisa karain mil k sitare bant lete hain
zarurat k mutabiq sab sahare bant lete hain

muhabbat kerne walon ki tijarat b anokhi hai
munafaa chorr dete hain khasare bant lete hain

agar milna nhi mumkin to lehron pe qadam rakh k
abhi daraya-e-ulfat k kinare bant lete hain

meri jholi main jitne bhi wafa k phool hain inn ko
ikatthe baith k sare k sare bant lete hain

khuloos k ilawa kuch nhi pas apne ZIA
isi dolat ko ham qismat k mare bant lete hain…

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Re: BANT LETE HEN…

haan jee hum to hain he khaloos kay bhokay, paanch kg day dain :slight_smile:

J/k buhat khoubsurat kalam :k: aur shukaria idhar post karnay ka kah idhar keonkah idhar to zang langay walla tha

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ap ki shakal b 5 se ooper ki nai lagti :smiley:
g inshalah ainda b koshish kerti rahun gi zang utarne ki :flowers:

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haan jee excercise kar kay kay yah haal ho gia hay warnah 10 lagti thi :bummer:

bari mahrabani aap key idahr aatay rahnay key

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kya 3 din k fakay ko exercise kehte hen :omg:
theek hai theek hai :smokin2:

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Woh kahtay hain na Ghareeb paisa kamanay key liye dorta hay
aur ameer khana hazam karnay kay liye tou main shayad ameer ho gia hoon :hehe:

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g behter…kya yahan sirf ap hazri dene k liye mukhtas hen :hinna:

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welcome to the forum.

aapke naam se ek aur Guppan yahaN huaa kartii thiiN…:hmmm:

bahot umda Ghazal hai. sabhii ash’aar umda haiN.

aayindah bhii post kartii rahiyegaa. :slight_smile:

vaise, aapne apnaa taKhallus “ZIA” kaise rakkhaa? yeh to mardaana saa taKhallus lagtaa hai. :hmmm:

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Haan jee, lagta hay abhi kissi ko iss bhoot Mahal main hazri ka pata naheen chala hay :smiley: Don’t worry soon you ll get some people here.

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Yah lain jee Hazri ho gai, aab aap ko afsos ho raha ho ga Allah say kuch aur maang laiteen :hehe:

Inn sahiba key tou idhar thori he say post hoi hain ?

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thanx per paen men gupan nai sachan :barbie: asal men apna p.word bhul gai :-s
ap ko shayad yad ho apni v first poetry ki correction ap se e krai thi or ap poetry ki book ka naam b ap ko btaya tha jo ap ko bra pasand aya is k ilawa ye btaya tha k hamare muhalle men alu bohat saste hen :blush:
hanji bilkul mardana hai q k mere kam b paion wale :smokin2: zia mere naam k last 3 letters hen.

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Re: BANT LETE HEN...

agar ye bhoot bangla hai tu phir men jaon q k men tu pari :@:

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bhoot kay sath paryan he hoti hain :hehe:

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plz ap khud ko bhut na kahen ap mujh se barre hen tu mujhe ap ko bhut kehna acha nai lagta ehram-e-misr ki mummies ki mummy :omg:

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Bhoot mujh say khoubusrat hotay hain :smiley: Jee, main mummy :eek: woh bhi monchoon samait :stuck_out_tongue:

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Beautiful ghazal