~~ * "Banjar Aankhen" * ~~

Salaam Everyone… how are u all doing? here is one of my own nazms. I hope you all are gonna like it.

** woh aik lamha.. aik saaket lamha woh sadiyon par muheet ik lamha

woh baadalon ki ghan giraj
woh bijliyon ki chamak..
woh hawaaon ka shor
woh aandhiyon ka zor..
woh raat toofaani
woh barasta paani..

meri nazren woh sabhi manzar dekhti raheen
yeh banjar aankhen hasrat se takti raheen
aur phir…
aik lamha aisa aaya
jab
bahar ke saaray mausam
dil ke andar utar aaye ..
aur
baarishon ka sab paani
banjar aankhon se barasnay laga !!
**

[This message has been edited by ~Maha~ (edited April 09, 2002).]

W-a-Salam Maha,
Welcome!!!
We r enjoying & hope u’ll enjoy being a part of us…
Ur nazm is very nice, I really like it

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Thanx 4 sharing

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Keep sharing ur nazms with us

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Welcome once more
See ya soon

Very nice....


~Kiya haaq wo jeena hai jo apnay hi liyay ho
Khud mit kar kisi aur ko mitnay se bacha lay~

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Originally posted by ~Maha~:
***Salaam Everyone*... how are u all doing? here is one of my nazms. I hope you all are gonna like it.

** woh aik lamha.. aik saaket lamha woh sadiyon par muheet ik lamha woh baadalon ki ghan giraj woh bijliyon ki chamak.. woh hawaaon ka shor woh aandhiyon ka zor.. woh raat toofaani woh barasta paani.. meri nazren woh sabhi manzar dekhti raheen yeh banjar aankhen hasrat se takti raheen aur phir... aik lamha aisa aaya jab bahar ke saaray mausam dil ke andar utar aaye .. aur baarishon ka sab paani banjar aankhon se barasnay laga !! **

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wah! bohat khobsuret. kya baat hai. thanks for sharing this beautiful nazam maha jee


mohabat aesa derya hai
k baarish rooth bhi ja a
to pani kum nahi hota!

[This message has been edited by Mahee (edited April 09, 2002).]

.. welcome

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.. a beautiful nazm - thank you for sharing it with us ..


To see a world in a grain of sand
And heaven in a wild flower
Hold affinity in the palm of your hand
And eternity in an hour

Thanks Shairah !
yes I am enjoying here as well, and inshaAllah will come up with more of my stuff. thanks again.


~~ * Maha * ~~

Thanks ** Maheen2002, Mahee and m_isabah**

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~~ * Maha * ~~

Its beautiful Maha. I liked ur nazm. You seem to be having an ease with usage of words to express ur feelings. wud love to read u more.

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its very nice Maha…
now we want more

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Kay hum tu Dhoop main baarishh kay woh qatray hain jo gir ker, dar-o-deevar per hi sookh jaatay hain…

Yes Maha!

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Ye Dil Mange More

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Nice...


**
سكورپین کنگ
§©ö®Þïoñ_kîñg
**
Even If You Are Basically Stupid
You Can Still Meet Nice People !

Thanks alot Perfectionist, I appreciate ur encouragement, and sure will be sharing more very soon.

Thanks again.


~~ * Maha * ~~

Thanks Dhoop

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you sure will get more

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~~ * Maha * ~~

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so sweet of you Shairah jee

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ab aap ne sar par danda rakh diya hai ..ab to jald hi kuch na kuch post karna pare ga.

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j/k…

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inshaAllah bohat jald aap sab se mazeed share karoongi.

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~~ * Maha * ~~

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Originally posted by speed master:
**Nice...

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Thanks Speed master


~~ * Maha * ~~

very Nice

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keeeeep it up

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~~~~~~~~
phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa’N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
~~~~~~~~~

~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

**

zabardassssssssst!!!

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**


I am like an Open Book Except for the few pages of my past, My life is an empty book. It takes the shape of a mystery, To me it does at least. For I cannot tell what happens next, Too many cliffhangers and too much suspense. But its clues all lead eventually to the same place, Unfortunately it does not say where. It only says get the next book, For in this one you’ ve ran out of room.

Mashallah another talented member in our forum!

Very well Maha :) Keep um coming.

very nice yaarjee

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and welcome here

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