banaa gulaab to kaaNTe chubhaa gayaa ik shaKhs

sweet_sana · February 28, 2006, 7:01pm

***banaa gulaab to kaaNTe chubhaa gayaa ik shaKhs
huaa chiraaG to ghar hii jalaa gayaa ik shaKhs

tamaam rang mere aur saare Khvaab mere
fasaanaa keh ke fasaanaa banaa gayaa ik shaKhs***

mein kis havaa mein uruuN kis fazaa mein laharauN
dukhon ke jaal har suu bichhaa gayaa ik shaKhs

palaT sakuuN mein na aage barh sakuuN jis par
mujhe ye kaun se raaste lagaa gayaa ik shaKhs

muhabbatein bhii ajab us kii nafaratein bhii kamaal
merii tarah kaa hii mujh mein samaa gayaa ik shaKhs

vo mahataab thaa marham-ba-dast aayaa thaa
magar kuchh aur sivaa dil dukhaa gayaa ik shaKhs

***khulaa ye raaz ke aaiinaa Khaanaa hai duniyaa
aur is mein mujh ko tamaashaa banaa gayaa ik shaKhs

nia_khan · February 28, 2006, 7:48pm

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:~) muj ko dewana kar gaya woh sakhs.

mirabbas · March 1, 2006, 12:00pm

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Khulee jo aankh tu wo tha na wo zamana tha
dahakti aag thi tanhaee thi fasaana tha

Ghamo'n ne baa'nt liya hain mujhe yun aa pas main
ke jaese main koee luuta howa khazaana tha

ye kya ke chund he khadmo'n pa thak ke baeth gaye
tumhe tu saath mera duur taq nibhaana tha

mujhe jo mere lahuu main dubo ke guzraa hain
wo koee ghaer nahee yaar aik puraana tha

Khud apne haath se "Shahzad" usko kaat diya
ki jiss darakht ki tahnee pe aashiyaana tha

By : Farhat Shahzad

chalo_ab_faisla_kar_lo · March 1, 2006, 12:31pm

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very nice mirabas is ghazal ka koi jawab nahin bohat khob

chalo_ab_faisla_kar_lo · March 1, 2006, 12:34pm

Re: banaa gulaab to kaaNTe chubhaa gayaa ik shaKhs

**and very nice sweet sana:)**

Noor_gr8 · March 3, 2006, 8:17am

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buhat khoob janab

NikamiJano · March 3, 2006, 11:06am

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nice one sana

sweet_sana · March 3, 2006, 7:54pm

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thx to all:)

_Miss_Meh · March 4, 2006, 8:32pm

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muhabbatein bhii ajab us kii nafaratein bhii kamaal
merii tarah kaa hii mujh mein samaa gayaa ik shaKhs

 ah...nice one

_Miss_Meh · March 4, 2006, 8:35pm

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Khulee jo aankh tu wo tha na wo zamana tha
dahakti aag thi tanhaee thi fasaana tha

Ghamo'n ne baa'nt liya hain mujhe yun aa pas main
ke jaese main koee luuta howa khazaana tha

ye kya ke chund he khadmo'n pa thak ke baeth gaye
tumhe tu saath mera duur taq nibhaana tha

mujhe jo mere lahuu main dubo ke guzraa hain
wo koee ghaer nahee yaar aik puraana tha

Khud apne haath se "Shahzad" usko kaat diya
ki jiss darakht ki tahnee pe aashiyaana tha

By : Farhat Shahzad

        very nice..thnx for sharing mirabbas...kindly requesting u...aap apni poem khud seperate post karain to ziyada acha hoga na..

chand_chehra · March 5, 2006, 4:46pm

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very nice :-)

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 5, 2006, 11:00pm

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always nice to read this ghazal :-) thank you for posting.

Amal · March 7, 2006, 12:40pm

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As ghazal kisi ke said, yes indeed, it's alway nice to read this ghazal. That's so sweet of you sweet sana :)

nakhan · March 7, 2006, 2:56pm

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bohot zabardast...

Thanks for sharing Sana :)

nakhan · March 7, 2006, 2:58pm

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Nice one Mirabbas

twin_born · March 7, 2006, 4:40pm

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thst tooo a really nice one .......... hey sana ..from where u get thts selection....tell me as well so tht i read directly from there .......... par nice one ......really nice one....

sweet_sana · March 8, 2006, 7:56pm

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some from my dairy n some from urdupoetry.com