bana bana ke tamanna mitai jaati hai...

[Daagh]

** bana bana ke tamanna mitai jaati hai tarah tarah se vafaa aazmaai jaati hai

jab un ko meri muhabbat ka aitabaar nahi
to jhukaa jhukaa ke nazar kyon milai jaati hai

hamaare dil kaa pataa vo hamen nahi dete
hamaari cheez hami se chhupai jaati hai

‘Shakeel’ duuri-e-manzil se naa-ummeed na ho
manzil ab aa hi jaati hai ab aa hi jaati hai
**

• Shakeel Badayuni -

[Koyal]

Re: bana bana ke tamanna mitai jaati hai…

*Originally posted by Daagh: *

** bana bana ke ** tamanna **mitai jaati hai tarah tarah se vafaa aazmaai jaati hai

bani huwei cheezon ko baar baar nahi banatey

jab un ko meri muhabbat ka aitabaar nahi
to jhukaa jhukaa ke nazar kyon milai jaati hai

pahan ka dekhaiey na.bechari anhkon ko baar baar keon takleaf daitey

hamaare dil kaa pataa vo hamen nahi dete
hamaari cheez hami se chhupai jaati hai

bataiey bataiey ye kon hain jo pata chata nahi day rehi

‘Shakeel’ duuri-e-manzil se naa-ummeed na ho
manzil ab aa hi jaati hai ab aa hi jaati hai
**

Btw aik beautiful gazal thanks 4 sharin..

[Daagh]

Re: Re: bana bana ke tamanna mitai jaati hai…

*Originally posted by Koyal: *

Btw aik beautiful gazal thanks 4 sharin..

thanks koyal jee for your lovely comments

[WiseGuy]

hamaare dil kaa pataa vo hamen nahi dete
hamaari cheez hami se chhupai jaati hai

Isi liay I keep my dil with me, na duur hoga na pata poochna paRay ga. :D

Nice poem, thank you for sharing.

[Daagh]

*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *
hamaare dil kaa pataa vo hamen nahi dete
hamaari cheez hami se chhupai jaati hai

Isi liay I keep my dil with me, na duur hoga na pata poochna paRay ga.

Nice poem, thank you for sharing.

haan mein bhi ab yahi soch raha hoon apne paas hi rakh leta hoon…but wapas nahi mil raha na