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[note]**NEW RULE: Aap sheir ke aakhiri lafz ke pehley harf ya aakhiri harf, donoN meiN sey kisi ko bhi apney reply ke leeye istimaal kar saktey heiN.**
This thread will be unlocked shortly once members take note of the new rule.
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Azizaan-e-man
Bait Bazi ka March Edition aek naey rule ke saath shuru kia ja raha hey ta ke aap ko sheir ka reply karne meiN sahoolat ho. Jesa ke kuch members ney suggest bhi kia tha, lehaaza is editon meiN aap sheir ke aakhiri lafz ke pehley harf ya aakhiri harf, donoN meiN sey kisi ko bhi apney reply ke leeye istimaal kar saktey heiN. Baqi rules wohi raheiN ge jo ke mundarja-zeil heiN:
Shair should be genuine and not your own.
— > Post your own in Bait Bazi — Personal Edition of Sho’ra-e-Gupshup.
Dont break the chain and always follow either the first or the last letter of the last posted shair.
Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair.
If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).
Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max will be allowed.
Hm to kam zarf hen ansu ko gira dety hen
wo samundar hen jo dariya ko panha dety hen
bach k rehna wafa k wadun sy
log zalim hen khuda ko b bhula dety hen
apne hathon ki lakiron mein basale mujhko
main hun tera nasib apna bana le mujhko mujhse tu puchne aya hai wafa k m'ani
ye teri sada dili maar na daley mujhko
bas daikh lain 