Bait Bazi - September 2013

muqawwee123 · September 2, 2013, 5:16pm

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Ab bhala chor kay ghar kya kartay
Sham kay waqat safar kya kartay

kaaf/ye

tarash · September 2, 2013, 5:18pm

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***Ye mojza bhi to kuch kam nahi k shaam_o_sehar,
Tumharay hijer main rehti hain baa’wazu aankhain,,

alif/noon

muqawwee123 · September 2, 2013, 5:38pm

Re: Bait Bazi - September 2013

Iss qadar sada dili tumne na dekhi hogi
Hum luteron ko nigahbaan bana lete hain

he/noon

tarash · September 2, 2013, 5:43pm

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***Naseeb mera bhi roshan ho surat_e_mehtaab,
Kbhi jo ker dain mohabat ko surkhruu aankhain,

alif/noon

muqawwee123 · September 2, 2013, 5:46pm

Re: Bait Bazi - September 2013

**Asar hua nahin uss par abhi zamane ka
yeh khwab zaad hai kirdaar kis fasaane ka

kaaf/alif
**

tarash · September 2, 2013, 5:49pm

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Kis qadar naadim hua hoon main bura keh kar usey,
Kya khabar thi jate jate woh dua de jaye ga ..

gaaf/alif

Aceones · September 2, 2013, 7:49pm

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go main raha rehen sitam-hae rozgar
lekin teray khayal say ghafil nahi raha

ray/alif

P_G · September 2, 2013, 7:57pm

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rahon main hi mile the ham rahen nasib ban gain
tu bhi na apne ghar gaya ham bhi na apne ghar gaye

Aceones · September 2, 2013, 8:01pm

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galee say teri dil ko lay to chala hoon
main pohnchoonga jab tak, ye aata rahega

P_G · September 2, 2013, 8:28pm

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Ik pathar idhar aaya hai tu is soach main hon
Meri is shahar main kis kis say shanasai hai

ehsan · September 3, 2013, 6:06am

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**Yun to kaya chez zindagi mein nahi
jese soche the apney jee mein nahi
ik sahks hai zindagi jesa
or woh shaks mere zindagi mein nahi

noon/ye**

KKF · September 3, 2013, 6:10am

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na poochh aaj bahaar-e-Khayaal kaa 'aalam
firaaq par bhii hai taarii visaal kaa 'aalam

ai'n OR meem se

Aceones · September 3, 2013, 6:25am

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Umr bhar sambki nigahoon main khaTak-ta hee raha
jurm itna tha k haq-goi mera maslak rahi

muqawwee123 · September 3, 2013, 6:28am

Re: Bait Bazi - September 2013

Rasm e ulfat hi ijazat nahin deti warna
hum bhi tumhe aisa bhoolen sada yaad rakho

re/wao

KKF · September 3, 2013, 6:30am

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can you double check the second misr'a plz.

meem se:**

moHabbat khel hai jab tak na ho Ghaarat_garii is meN
jalaa vo shamm'a jo aatish_zan-e-kaashaanah ho jaaye**

Aceones · September 3, 2013, 6:35am

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"Tehri" instead of "rahi" will "feel" better as last word of second misra, right? : ) i checked, meray pas esa hee hay, ho sakt ahay ghala tho

ye tassaruf hay tera, ya me'yaar-e-wafa mera
tark-e-ulfat pay bhi to utna hi pyara kyun hay?

muqawwee123 · September 3, 2013, 11:32am

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Ho Sadaqat Ke Liye Jis Dil Mein Marne Ki Tarap
Pehle Apne Paikar-E-Khaki Mein Jaan Paida Kare

kaaf/ye

tarash · September 3, 2013, 3:58pm

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Kaha tha na usey mat zabt karna,
Woh aansuu ab samandar ho geya naa

noon

P_G · September 3, 2013, 7:26pm

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nahi yeh zindagi aik do qadam ki
pera hai raah main sehra k sehra

ehsan · September 3, 2013, 7:36pm

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**Inhin Raaston Nay Jin Pay Kabhi Tum Thay Saath Meray
Mujhay Rok Rok Poocha Tera Humsafar Kahan Hai

hey/ye**