naya mahina, nai shroo’aat
Mita de apni hasti gar kuch martaba chahiye
ke daana khaak main milkar gul o gulzar hota hai
he/ ye
Re: Bait Bazi - September 2013
hay showq aur zabt-e-showq main din raat kashmakash
dil mujh ko, main hun dil ko pareshaan kiye huway
he/ye
Re: Bait Bazi - September 2013
Hai Meri Jurraat Se Musht-e-Khak Mein Zauq-e-Namoo
Mere Fitne Jama-e-Aqal-o-Khirad Ka Taar-o-Poo
Khizar Bhi Bedast-o-Pa, Ilyas Bhi Bedast-o-Pa
Mere Toofan Yam-Ba-Yam, Darya-Ba-Darya, Joo-Ba-Joo
Jeem / Wao
Re: Bait Bazi - September 2013
*ham unse dil kaa Haal bhii na kah paaye aur
vo chale gaye, waada-o-paimaaN kiye huye
*
He/YE se
Re: Bait Bazi - September 2013
yun hi besabab na phira karo, koi shaam ghar bhi raha karo
vo Gazal kii sachii kitaab hai, use chupke chupke paRha karo
kaaf/wao
Re: Bait Bazi - September 2013
kaheen ik khushi ki talaash main, gham-e-dostaan ko bhi kho na doon
to ye tay huwa meray chaaragar, ke jo paas hay, mujhay raas hay
he/ye
Re: Bait Bazi - September 2013
Hamare aur tumhare waaste main ek naya pun tha
Magar dunia purani hai na tum samjhe na hum samjhe
seen/ ye
Re: Bait Bazi - September 2013
yun hi besabab na phira karo, koi shaam ghar bhi raha karo vo Gazal kii sachii kitaab hai, use chupke chupke paRha karo
kaaf/wao
waah...mere ustaad moHtaram kaa she'r zabardast hai! :)
**
vo dil hii kia tere milne kii jo du'aa na kare
maiN tujhko bhuul ke zinda rahuN, Khudaa na kare!
**KAAF/YE se
Re: Bait Bazi - September 2013
waah...mere ustaad moHtaram kaa she'r zabardast hai! :) ** vo dil hii kia tere milne kii jo du'aa na kare maiN tujhko bhuul ke zinda rahuN, Khudaa na kare!
**KAAF/YE se
Kuch to hawa bhi sard thi kuch tha tera khayal bhi
dil ko khushi ke sath sath hota raha malal bhi
be / ye
who is your ustaad? Bashir Badr or Qateel Shifai?
Re: Bait Bazi - September 2013
*baat karanii mujhe mushkil kabhii aisii to na thii
jaisii ab hai terii mahafil kabhii aisii to na thii *
**
Tey/ye**
Re: Bait Bazi - September 2013
Teri Umeed Tera Intezaar Jab Se Hai,
Na Shab Ko Dinse Shikayat Na Dinko Shab Se Hai
He/ye
Re: Bait Bazi - September 2013
haal maazi aur mustaqbil ki fikar khaa gaiee
ye safar kab khatm hoga aadmi ki soch ka
kaaf/alif
Re: Bait Bazi - September 2013
Ab ke hum bichRen to shayad kabhi khwabon main milen
jis tarah sookhe huwe phool kitabon main milen
Meem/ Noon
Re: Bait Bazi - September 2013
**meri nazreN to aise qaafiron ka jaan-o-imaan hai
nigaahen milte hi jo jaam aur imaan lete hain
hey/noon**
Re: Bait Bazi - September 2013
Na Tha kucH to Khuda tha, Kuch na hota to Khuda hota
dubooYa mujhKo hoNe ne, na hota maiN to kya hota
hey/ alif
Re: Bait Bazi - September 2013
hay yunhi ghoomtay rehnay ka mazaa hi kuchh aur
ayesi lazzat na pohonch-nay main, na rehjaanay main
meem/noon
Re: Bait Bazi - September 2013
Kuch to hawa bhi sard thi kuch tha tera khayal bhi dil ko khushi ke sath sath hota raha malal bhi
be / ye
who is your ustaad? Dr. Bashir Badr or Qateel Shifai?
Bashir Badr...he taught me a couple of undergrad Urdu courses at Aligarh Muslim University. there was another famous shaa'ir who also taught me one course...his name was Dr. Shehryaar [Prof. AKhlaq MoHammad Khan], the one who wrote ALL the Ghazals of Rekha's Umraao Jaan.
Re: Bait Bazi - September 2013
hay yunhi ghoomtay rehnay ka mazaa hi kuchh aur ayesi lazzat na pohonch-nay main, na rehjaanay main
meem/noon
Mujh pe toofan uthae logon ne
Muft bethe bithae logon ne
kar dia apne aane jane ke
tazkire jae jae logon ne
noon/ ye
Re: Bait Bazi - September 2013
naram naram phoolon ka rass neChoR leti hain
pat'thar kay dil hotay hain, titliyoon kay senay main
meen/noon
Re: Bait Bazi - September 2013
mere ishq se mili he tere husn ko ye shohrat
tera zikr hi kahan tha meri daastan se pehle
pe/ ye