This is the Third part of Personal Edition of Bait Bazi. We had over 200 beautiful aashaar in the second edition. Let us continue from where we had stopped.
NOTE: Unlike the Intikhaab’s Bait Bazi, work of others is not allowed here AT ALL. To exactly match the theme of this forum — please post your own aashaar only! Every participant is requested to please strictly adhere to this restriction or otherwise the fun will go. That’s all guys.
Starting from the Second Edition:
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**Wo ajnabhi hey na'jaaney kya dil meiN ho us ke
tum apni taqdeer uski lakeeroN sey mila beitthey ho
ab na jaaney isey bachaaney ki kya qeemat ho gi
tum toofaan meiN ye jo chiraagh jalaa beitthey ho
"Wao"
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Wuhi baam-o-dar hain wuhi hain fazaaiN
Sunaai deti hein hum ko dil ki sadaaiN
Noon''
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Bohot khoob Amal. Zameen tau milti julti hai, maiN soch rahii hooN inn asha’ar ko shamil kar k apnee ghazal mukammal kar loon 
Neend aaye gee na ab khuaab hi daikhaiN gay
Hum shab-o-roz zamaane se nahiN uljhaiN gay
Aaj bhee dil ko yaqeeN hai k woh din aaye ga
Haath le kar teraa haathon meiN, chalain gay
“Ye”
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Ye duwaaein saari ye sadaaeiN saari, ye mannatoN ke chiraagh saarey
inhey rah'guzar meiN sajaa ke har shab, tu kis ko takta hey be'khudi meiN!
"Noon"
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Naheen taqdeer mein apni kahoon jab baat bhi sachhi!
*Jawaban chand mil jaae himaayat aap logon ki? *
"Ye"
(Bibi Nikammi Jano ka bheja hua dilshikan aetaraz parh kar yeh sher taassuran likha gaya!)
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Ye yaad tha ke duwa karooN par utthey rahey merey haath yuN
jesey khaahishoN ke hajoom meiN kaheeN kho gai teri aarzu
"Wao"
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woh mil gya aaaj sar-e-rah mujhey
na milney ki qasam jo khaye baitha tha
dekh k mujhey yaad aye usey adab-e-muhabbat
aik mudat sey jo mujhey bhulaye baitha tha
*** alif***
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Beautiful :k:
Uss ki yadon ko tau hum kab se bhulaa baithay haiN
Yeh tau chand khawb haiN jo dil mein chupaa rakhay haiN
Ab bhee lot aa k khiza’on se churaa kar hum ne
Phool kuch taza teri rahon main sajaa rakhay haiN
“Noon”
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Na jaaney qismat ke band saheefoN meiN kon kis ko ataa huwa hey
meiN apni khaahish ke kaaghzoN par tera naam likhooN to kesey likhooN!
jo teri nigaahoN ke tamaam rangoN ko bayaaN ka pyara libaas bakhshey
meiN banam-e-hum’dam dhanak ke jesa kalaam likhooN to kesey likhooN!
“Noon”
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Na jaane kab se aakar thehraa hoon main is dareeche par!
Keh mujh tak bhi koi aaye payaam e dosti nagaah!
Yeh mere saamne kitni khuli hain khirkiyaan inse !
Mere bhi waastey kuchh kah uthey koi ajnabi nagaah!
"He"
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Bohot shukria Amal Its under progress and needs really SOME work, as evident from the following she’r
HaiN talkh shab-o-roz-e-judaee, magar terii khatir
Hum ne sub rang mohabbat k bachaa rakhay haiN
“Noon”
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Nihayat sard mehri hai, hai unki be rukhi aisi!
Jinhein kar ke mukhaatib sher likhte hain yunhi aksar!
Jawaban kuchh na kartey wo, na kahtey hain na kuchh likhtey!
Aur hum parwaaz e fikr o fan lagaatey hain yunhi aksar!
** "Re"**
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Raat ki baat na karna ke kesi kat'ti hey
shaam ki baat bhi chorro ke kesey dhalti hey
jis ko aana tha aakhir wo reh gaya hey kahaN!
ummeed ho ke pareyshaan haath malti hey
"Ye"
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Cool stuff Sahaab :k:
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Ye aur baat kay wo shaam nahi, wo subh-o-raat nahi
Jo dil nay chaha jo nazar nay manga, wo haalaat nahi
buss khabhi dheeray sey aa jaati hay yuNhi teri yaad
bheegay hovay jangal main tunhai dukh ki baat nahi
"Ye"
PS:- Corrected by Amal :)
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BB I like the last line :-)
Yeh jantey huwey keh suraj ki tapish sey pighal jaey ga
mein moum kaa ik mahal bananay chali hoon
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:) may be caz Germany ka mosaam thora surd ho raha aur barish ho rahi tu is liye :p
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Neend thi khwab thy or tum thy
Ankh thi sarrab thy or tum thy
Pari mushkil tumhra sath chaha
Hamari zeest ki hr aas tum thy
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