yah kya qeyaamat hai baagbaano! ke jin ki khaatir bahaar aayi
wohi shagoofe khaTak rahe haiN, tumhaari aankhoN meN khaar ban kar
Raaz-e-ulfat chupa ke dekh liye, dil bahut kuch jala ke dekh liya
Aur kya dekhne ko baaqi hai, aap se dil laga ke dekh liya
insan yun to hyat hai laikin
guzerti nahien umer akele kabhi
Aaj kya baat hai ke phoolon ka rang teri hansi se milta hai
Mil ke bhi jo kabhi nahin milta, toot kar dil ussi se milta hai
do not mind for one thing
do follow the rulz of bait bazi
your sheir should beging from last letter of previous sheir
yah jaise log haiN waise nazar nahiN aate
rafaaqtoN meN chhupi haiN adaawateN kya kya..
Sorry.... I forgot..... by the way this one of you didn't start with the last one either....just to remind you, don't mind
insan yun to hyat hai laikin
guzerti nahien umer akele kabhi
This one from my side now....:)
Aa bhi jao ke zindagi kam hai
Tum nahin ho to har khushi kam hai
excelent yaar
yaaro iss dard-e-muhabbat ki dawa batlaao
dhooNdh leNge gham-e-doraaN ka to darmaaN koi...
Ik na ik rif'at ke agey sajda laazim hai to phir
Aadmi mahv-e-sajood-e-sirr-e-khubaan kyun na ho
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*Originally posted by KhamoshNigahein: *
Sorry.... I forgot..... by the way this one of you didn't start with the last one either....just to remind you, don't mind
insan yun to hyat hai laikin
guzerti nahien umer akele kabhi
This one from my side now....:)
Aa bhi jao ke zindagi kam hai
Tum nahin ho to har khushi kam hai
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*Yeh shaam aaj kuch alag rang laiii hai
phir bhi har shaam ki tarha meri aankh bhar aai hai *
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Ik na ik rif'at ke agey sajda laazim hai to phir
Aadmi mahv-e-sajood-e-sirr-e-khubaan kyun na ho
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woh jab zara rooTha chup baiThe rahe hum bhi
ik baar mana lete..to roz khafa hota..
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*Originally posted by KhamoshNigahein: *
Ik na ik rif'at ke agey sajda laazim hai to phir
Aadmi mahv-e-sajood-e-sirr-e-khubaan kyun na ho
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Woh ranjishain hi sahin thin kai to humsai tha to mukhatib
ab to teri awaz kai hijr main sada bhi nahi nikal pati dil sai
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*Originally posted by arfin99: *
*Yeh shaam aaj kuch alag rang laiii hai
phir bhi har shaam ki tarha meri aankh bhar aai hai *
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Izhaar-e-mohabbat na kiya bas issi darr se
Aisa na ho girr jaoon kahin unki nazar se
yahi to baat buhat baayas-e-khushi hai mujhe!
woh aankh kitni mohabbat se dekhti hai mujhe!
waisay aap ka sheir kafi achha tha
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*Originally posted by amirbilal: *
yahi to baat buhat baayas-e-khushi hai mujhe!
woh aankh kitni mohabbat se dekhti hai mujhe!
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Last on for today from my side....
Ek tooti hui zanjeer ki faryaad hain hum
Aur dunya samajhti hai ke azaad hain hum
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*Originally posted by amirbilal: *
waisay aap ka sheir kafi achha tha
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Bahut bahut shukriya jee.... aap bhi kaafi ache sher post kar rahe hain...thanks :)
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*Originally posted by KhamoshNigahein: *
Izhaar-e-mohabbat na kiya bas issi darr se
Aisa na ho girr jaoon kahin unki nazar se
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Wah kia baat kahi hai ,, MERE dil ki baat hai yeh ;)
** Yeh ranj bhi kam tha kai tere jaanay kai baad
har khushi main ghum ko dhoonda hai humnay
is umeed sai talasha hai teri nafrat ko ae humnafas kai
janain gay teri mohabbat ko kai kuch to paya hai humnai **
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*Originally posted by KhamoshNigahein: *
Last on for today from my side....
Ek tooti hui zanjeer ki faryaad hain hum
Aur dunya samajhti hai ke azaad hain hum
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Milna tumhara mujh sai mehaz Haadsa na tha
Yeh kaarnama dil ka, karishma dua ka tha
Hum mubtala-e-Ishq thay har giz na keh sakai
Khamosh hi rahay, yeh taqaza haya ka tha
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*Originally posted by amirbilal: *
yahi to baat buhat baayas-e-khushi hai mujhe!
woh aankh kitni mohabbat se dekhti hai mujhe!
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Yeh raat aur ismain simtay woh sitaray sabhi
kyuon yaad dilatay hain teri ankhon ki mujhe
Gehri itni kai kho janay ka dar rahay hamesha
Khoain aisay kai mil na phir sakin mujhe