Bait Bazi Part - LXIX

DeSiMuNdA · June 30, 2003, 5:02pm

Rules of Bait Bazi:

1. Shair should be genuine and not a fabricated one.
2. One “response shair” is allowed per shair.
3. Dont break the chain and always follow the last posted shair.
4. If more than one shair is posted in response, follow the last posted shair.
5. If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).
6. We should follow urdu alphabets.
7. Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair. (if it’s “HAMZA” by any chance,
which could hardly be the case, then also mention the second last alphabet).
8. Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Ruba`i, qit`a) at max
will be allowed.
9. Avoid posting film songs.

Shuriya

DeSiMuNdA · June 30, 2003, 5:03pm

last shair in the last thread:

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Amarbail: *
Neend is soch se tooti aksar
Kis tarah kat'tee hain raatain us ki...

Next: Ye
[/QUOTE]

DeSiMuNdA · June 30, 2003, 5:39pm

yeh kis makaam par sohji tuje bicharne ki
ke ab tu ja ke kahain din sanwarne wale the

Amarbail1 · June 30, 2003, 5:43pm

Yeh acha hai ke aapas ke bharam naa totne paayain
Kabhi bhi dostoo ko aazmaa kar kuch nahee milta...

Next: Alif

DeSiMuNdA · June 30, 2003, 5:55pm

aansu chalak chalak ke sataaenge raat bhar
moti palak palak mein piroyaa karenge ham

"meem"

Amarbail1 · June 30, 2003, 7:15pm

Mere chaahane wale mujh ko bhool gaye tu kya
Mausam ho tabdeel tu pattay jharne lagte hain...

Next: Noon

arfin99 · July 1, 2003, 4:52am

*Na umeed hai koi, na rahi hai chahat tumsai
is dil ko phir kyuon ab bhi raahat hai tumsai *

NEXT : ** YEH **

juMurA · July 1, 2003, 5:44am

ye kisi doost ki sazish thi keh dushman ki rawish
ye mouma hay fiqat war khata honnay taq

"qaf"

Lamhay · July 1, 2003, 7:10am

koi bhi meri tarhan say agar dua mangay

khuda say sirf dil-e-dard ashna mangay!

Amarbail1 · July 1, 2003, 10:24am

Yun tanhai mein hum dil ko saza dete hain
Naam likhte hain tera likh kar mita detay hain
Jab bhi koi nakaam muhabbat ka zikar karay
Log hans detay hain mera naam bata detay hain

Next: Noon

Lamhay · July 1, 2003, 11:38am

**
nahin aisa kay chaal patay nahin hum
bas iss dil say nikal patay nahin hum
kuch aisi beyqarari bhi nahin hai
sukoon bhi aik paal patay nahin hum!**

juMurA · July 1, 2003, 11:59am

maiN janta houn dunya tujhay badaL day gi
may manta houN ke aisa nahi baZahir tou

"woo"

Lamhay · July 1, 2003, 12:02pm

woh jhoot bol raha tha baray saliqay say
main aitbaar na karta tu aur kia karta!

juMurA · July 1, 2003, 12:32pm

*Aa ja tujhay bay-sakhta sinay sa laga loun
ay doost tabiyat zara ghabraye hoi hay *

"ye"

Lamhay · July 1, 2003, 12:33pm

ye khudh azeeyati kab taak faraz tu bhi issay

na yaad kar kay jisay bhoolnay ki adaat hai!

Amarbail1 · July 1, 2003, 12:33pm

.............

Lamhay · July 1, 2003, 12:37pm

ye kia hai?

juMurA · July 1, 2003, 12:52pm

Yaad aye subha koi ibTadae umer ki
woh gul-e-taza ki surat muskranay ma lagay

"ya"

Lamhay · July 1, 2003, 12:56pm

**
ye tu ankh ka aik dhoka hai
warna tujh main kia rakha hai
meri chahaat teri nafraat
main kaisa hoon tu kaisa hai!**

juMurA · July 1, 2003, 1:36pm

ye kari dhoop aur teez huwa
koi chara ke sayBan theray

"ya"