Bait Bazi Part - LVIII

Sehar · January 24, 2002, 5:18pm

Rules of Bait Bazi:

Shair should be genuine and not a fabricated one.
One “response shair” is allowed per shair.
Dont break the chain and always follow the last posted shair.
If more than one shair is posted in response, follow the last posted shair.
If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).
We should follow urdu alphabets.
Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair. (if it’s “HAMZA” by any chance,
which could hardly be the case, then also mention the second last alphabet).
Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max
will be allowed.
Avoid posting film songs.

Shukriya

Amal · January 24, 2002, 6:12pm

Well, no contribution from the mod???

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… mushaerey pe ye din bhi aana tha

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Anyway, here is a sheir for both the mods, if they EVER happen to see it

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Ye kis tarhaaN ke ajeeb mosam aa rukey heiN falak pe merey

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hawa bhi gumsum fiza bhi gumsum, na “~Sehar~” aaey na “Dhoop” aaey
ye moderators kahaaN chupeeN heiN koi jo poochey to kya bataaooN
ye log naa hoN to kis tarhaN sey mushaaeroN pe koi roop aaey

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“ye”
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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…

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Gemini_the_Great · January 24, 2002, 6:19pm

hehe.... Amal bhai aap ki udai pe mujhay hansi aa rahi :)

yun saja chand ke jhalka teray andaz ka rang
yun fiza mehki ke badla meray hamraz ka rang

next: "Gaf"

As is a tale, so is life: not how long it is, but how good it is, is what matters. -- Seneca

Farwa · January 24, 2002, 7:04pm

LOL amal

Gaye dinoN kaa suraaG lekar kidhar se aayaa kidhar gayaa vo
Ajiib maanuus ajanabii thaa mujhe to hairaan kar gayaa vo

'wao'

Jaan-e-Ghazal · January 24, 2002, 7:39pm

~ Woh samandar hai to phir rooh ko shaadaab kare,

Tishnagii kyun mujhe deta hai saraabon ki tarah...

next letter "ha"

Shaam-e-Firaq · January 24, 2002, 8:55pm

Hum ba-wafa thay is liye nazron say gir gaye
Shayad tumhain talash kisi be-wafa ki thee

"Dream as if u live forever live as if u will die today"

Sehar · January 24, 2002, 9:18pm

Shaam-e-Firaq, you were to start with 'Hay' as in 'halaat' . Khair, i'll continue with 'Hay'.

This is for Amal Bhai with a sincere apology:

[quote]
haadsoN ki gardish ne hi na mohlat di
wagarna humein lautna to isi rang-e-mehfil mein tha
rahi zindagi to bataaiN gay aapko bhi Amal
waqt-e-shirkat, kuch lamhoN ka hasil bhi kitna muskhil tha
[/quote]

'alif'

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Shaam-e-Firaq · January 24, 2002, 9:30pm

Oh SEHAR Ji I am really sorry

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next time dhayan se parhain ge and likhain ge I aplogise

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“Dream as if u live forever live as if u will die today”

Shaam-e-Firaq · January 24, 2002, 9:33pm

Ik Intehaae shok meiN uss se kya sawaal
wuh aesay chup huwa keh jawab ho kay reh geya

"Dream as if u live forever live as if u will die today"

andha_qanoon · January 24, 2002, 9:36pm

Ek hi ullo kaafi hai ,Barbaad Gulisataan karne ko
Har Shaakh pe ullu baitah hai ,Anjaam-e-gulistan kya hoga

next "Alif"

Jiyo Aur Jeene Do!!!

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Gemini_the_Great · January 25, 2002, 1:55am

is darja eihtiyat se khat likhay hain usay
roya yun yun ke harf gelay nahin howay!!!

next: "YaY"

As is a tale, so is life: not how long it is, but how good it is, is what matters. -- Seneca

Amal · January 25, 2002, 2:01am

good one **Farwa

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Ye kya maqaam-e-shoq hey na aas hey na yaas hey Ye kya huwa ke lab pe tera naam aa ke reh gaya

“alif”

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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…

Amal · January 25, 2002, 2:03am

Sehar just stay around…that’s all we want

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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…

Sehar · January 25, 2002, 2:11am

aankhoN se baRa koi mas'oor nahi Khalid
ashkoN se jo jazbaat ki tasveer bana de

andha_qanoon · January 25, 2002, 3:38am

Phir stupid “yey” aa gya .

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I will back after sometine

Jiyo Aur Jeene Do!!!

andha_qanoon · January 25, 2002, 3:53am

ok..here is a Shaer with "yey"

Yes Bhi Addab-e-Muhabbat ne gawara na Kiya
unki tasveer bhi sene se lagaai na gayee

next "yey"

Jiyo Aur Jeene Do!!!

Farwa · January 25, 2002, 4:07am

Yeh main bhi kya hoon keh usay bhool kar bhi usi ka raha
Keh jiskay saath na tha, humsafar usi ka raha

'alif'

Sehar · January 25, 2002, 4:14am

umeed-o-khuaab-o-waa'da, dil-o-jaam-o-aaina
tootay huay sabhi ko zamaana guzar gaya

'alif'

andha_qanoon · January 25, 2002, 4:16am

Ek Brahman ne kaha hai ki yeh Saal Achcha hai
Dil ko behlane ka ghalib yeh khyal Achcha hai

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next “yey”

Jiyo Aur Jeene Do!!!

Farwa · January 25, 2002, 4:16am

yeh kahan ki dosti hai keh bane hain dost dushman
koi chara saaz hota koi ghamgusaar hota

'alif'

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