Bait Bazi Month of October 2008

Rules of Bait Bazi:

1. Shair should be genuine and not your own. Post your own in Bait Bazi — Personal Edition of Sho’ra-e-Gupshup.

2. Dont break the chain and always follow the last letter of the last posted shair.

3. Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair.

4. If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).

5. Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max will be allowed.

6. Avoid posting film songs.

last shair posted by ..Berhi_Bee

Yun to Hum’raaz hay mera har Rang ka Mausam lekin
Shaam-e-afsurda mujhe sub say juda Jaanti hay…!!!

ye


Yeh raaz us par khulay ga jo khud ko pehchane
ke ek yaqeen ki manzil bhi hai gumaan ke baad

daal

Re: Bait Bazi Month of October 2008

Dil k hai ik goonjtee khamoshiyoon k shaher sa
Shor sa barpaa hai lekin bolta koyee nahin

"noon"

Re: Bait Bazi Month of October 2008

Nahi wo shakhs muqaddar mein phir b us se milte hain faraz`
barraa purr luttff lagtaa haii muqaddarr ko sazaa dayynaa...

Alif

Itna qareeb tou aa ke tujhey nazar sey chuh sakuN
ik pal ko apni qurbatoN ki bheek dey mujhey

Ye''

Re: Bait Bazi Month of October 2008

ye kiya ghazab hay k tum bhi singhaar karti huu
bahaar hu k talaash,e bahaar karti huu......???

waoo


Woh jis key hijr main ronaa usay dua daina
Samjh main nahin aata falsafa Mohabbat ka

alif

Re: Bait Bazi Month of October 2008

Ek weham hai yeh duniya iss mein
kuch kho tou kia kuch paao tou kia

Alif

Apney kandhon pe janaazey liye apney apney

hum karoroon hein mager phir bhi akeley kyun hein

noon''

Re: Bait Bazi Month of October 2008

**na kaRtaa zabt maiN naalaa to phiR aisa dhuua'N uThtaa
ki neeche aasmaa'N ke auR nayaa ik aasmaa'N hotaa *
*

***"alif'


aay raat k andh-yaaray mein jagay howay lamho!
Dhoondhoo ossay wo khawab-e Preshaan ki tarah tha

alif

andhaRay main the jab talak zamana sazgaaR tha**
chiRag kia jala dee'ya hawa he Or ho ga'eye

"ye'

Yay hum bhi jantay haiN, zindgi ek khwab hai afser
Mager is khwab ki akhir koi tabeer bhi ho gi

" Yay "

Re: Bait Bazi Month of October 2008

YahaN se ab kahin le chal khayaal-e-yaar mujhey
Chaman mein raas na aayegi ye bahaar mujhey

''yeh''

Re: Bait Bazi Month of October 2008

Yuun Bhi Nahin Ke Meray Bulanay Se Aa Gaya
Jab Reh Nahin Saka To Bahanay Se Aa Gaya
Kuch Aur Sanpoleay Bhi To Haqdaar Thay Zafar
Main Apne Aap Uth Ke Khazanay Se Aa Gaya

'Alif'

Re: Bait Bazi Month of October 2008

ab meray deed kii duniya bhii tamaashaye hai
tum nay kya mujh ko muhabbat main banaa rakhaa hai

piijaa aiyaam kii talKhii ko bhii husskay "Nasir"
Gam ko sahane me.n bhii kudarat ne mazaa rakhaa hai

"Yeh"

Re: Bait Bazi Month of October 2008

Ye Jo Raat Din Ka Hai Khel Sa Isay Dekh Iss Pe Yakeen Na Rakh
Nahin Aks Koi Bhi Mustaqil Sir-e-Ayena, Usay Bhool Ja

'Alif'

Re: Bait Bazi Month of October 2008

Aik Pal Baghair Daikhay Usay Guzar Kyaa Gaya
Aisaa Laga Keh Aik Zamanaa Guzar Gayaa
Uskay Liay Rahay Buland Haath Umer Bhar
Keh APNAY li'ay Dua'on Ka Lamhaa Guzar Gayaa !!

Alif

Re: Bait Bazi Month of October 2008

aik nafrat hi nahi duniya main dard ka sabab Faraz
mohabat bhi sukoon waloon ko bari takeelf deti he

"ye"

Yaaraan-e-wafaa jab loTeiN ge
paaband-e-salaasil yaadoN ko
ashkoN k mol meiN tolaiN ge
hum har dam rozan-e-zindaaN meiN
terii yaad k motii dhoondheiN ge

Ye''