Rules of Bait Bazi:
1. Shair should be genuine and not your own. Post your own in Bait Bazi — Personal Edition of Sho’ra-e-Gupshup.
2. Dont break the chain and always follow the last letter of the last posted shair.
3. Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair.
4. If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).
5. Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max will be allowed.
6. Avoid posting film songs.
last shair posted by ..Berhi_Bee
Yun to Hum’raaz hay mera har Rang ka Mausam lekin
Shaam-e-afsurda mujhe sub say juda Jaanti hay…!!!
ye
Re: Bait Bazi Month of October 2008
Dil k hai ik goonjtee khamoshiyoon k shaher sa
Shor sa barpaa hai lekin bolta koyee nahin
"noon"
Re: Bait Bazi Month of October 2008
Nahi wo shakhs muqaddar mein phir b us se milte hain faraz`
barraa purr luttff lagtaa haii muqaddarr ko sazaa dayynaa...
Alif
Itna qareeb tou aa ke tujhey nazar sey chuh sakuN
ik pal ko apni qurbatoN ki bheek dey mujhey
Ye''
S.786
October 3, 2008, 7:31pm
6
Re: Bait Bazi Month of October 2008
ye kiya ghazab hay k tum bhi singhaar karti huu
bahaar hu k talaash,e bahaar karti huu......???
waoo
Re: Bait Bazi Month of October 2008
Ek weham hai yeh duniya iss mein
kuch kho tou kia kuch paao tou kia
Alif
Apney kandhon pe janaazey liye apney apney
hum karoroon hein mager phir bhi akeley kyun hein
noon''
Re: Bait Bazi Month of October 2008
**na kaRtaa zabt maiN naalaa to phiR aisa dhuua'N uThtaa
ki neeche aasmaa'N ke auR nayaa ik aasmaa'N hotaa * *
***"alif'
andhaRay main the jab talak zamana sazgaaR tha **
chiRag kia jala dee'ya hawa he Or ho ga'eye
"ye'
Sheal
October 5, 2008, 2:30pm
13
Yay hum bhi jantay haiN, zindgi ek khwab hai afser
Mager is khwab ki akhir koi tabeer bhi ho gi
" Yay "
muncho
October 5, 2008, 8:25pm
14
Re: Bait Bazi Month of October 2008
YahaN se ab kahin le chal khayaal-e-yaar mujhey
Chaman mein raas na aayegi ye bahaar mujhey
''yeh''
Re: Bait Bazi Month of October 2008
Yuun Bhi Nahin Ke Meray Bulanay Se Aa Gaya
Jab Reh Nahin Saka To Bahanay Se Aa Gaya
Kuch Aur Sanpoleay Bhi To Haqdaar Thay Zafar
Main Apne Aap Uth Ke Khazanay Se Aa Gaya
'Alif'
Re: Bait Bazi Month of October 2008
ab meray deed kii duniya bhii tamaashaye hai
tum nay kya mujh ko muhabbat main banaa rakhaa hai
piijaa aiyaam kii talKhii ko bhii husskay "Nasir"
Gam ko sahane me.n bhii kudarat ne mazaa rakhaa hai
"Yeh"
Re: Bait Bazi Month of October 2008
Ye Jo Raat Din Ka Hai Khel Sa Isay Dekh Iss Pe Yakeen Na Rakh
Nahin Aks Koi Bhi Mustaqil Sir-e-Ayena, Usay Bhool Ja
'Alif'
Re: Bait Bazi Month of October 2008
Aik Pal Baghair Daikhay Usay Guzar Kyaa Gaya
Aisaa Laga Keh Aik Zamanaa Guzar Gayaa
Uskay Liay Rahay Buland Haath Umer Bhar
Keh APNAY li'ay Dua'on Ka Lamhaa Guzar Gayaa !!
Alif
Re: Bait Bazi Month of October 2008
aik nafrat hi nahi duniya main dard ka sabab Faraz
mohabat bhi sukoon waloon ko bari takeelf deti he
"ye"
Yaaraan-e-wafaa jab loTeiN ge
paaband-e-salaasil yaadoN ko
ashkoN k mol meiN tolaiN ge
hum har dam rozan-e-zindaaN meiN
terii yaad k motii dhoondheiN ge
Ye''