Bait Bazi Month of July 2008

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
100

Meray daikhay hoay sapnay kaheeN lehraiN na lay jaiN
Gharooonday rait kay tameer ker kay choor deta hooN
Adeem ab tak wohi bachpan, wohi takhreebkari hai
Qafs ko tor deta hooN, parinday choor deta hooN

" Noon "

Which one is correct?
Which one is correct?