Bait Bazi Month of July 2008

Shab-e-Hijar · July 1, 2008, 10:06pm

Rules of Bait Bazi:

1. Shair should be genuine and not your own. Post your own in Bait Bazi — Personal Edition of Sho’ra-e-Gupshup.

2. Dont break the chain and always follow the last letter of the last posted shair.

3. Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair.

4. If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).

5. Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max will be allowed.

6. Avoid posting film songs.

last shair posted by ...S.786

ossy kahuk buhut naamuraad shay hay jnoon

ossay kaho k mujhy hy buhut junoon oskaa…

alif

muddii · July 2, 2008, 3:35am

Aa Bhee Jaoo Kay Zindagee Kum Hai
Tum Nahee Hu Tu Her Khushi Kum Hai

"Alif"

redidentity · July 2, 2008, 4:44am

Re: Bait Bazi Month of July 2008

Itni Fursat Bhi Kisay Hai Lekin
Gaahay Gaahay Humain Poocha Kejay

'Ye'

S.786 · July 2, 2008, 6:56am

Re: Bait Bazi Month of July 2008

yehi ossol hy apna kissi ka dil na dukhy...

judaaiyon ko bhi chaha hy qurbaton ki trah

hae

Shab-e-Hijar · July 2, 2008, 7:06am

har baab meiN ja kar dhoonda hey meiN ne humdum kirdaar tera
is mehr-o-wafaa ke qissey meiN bas meiN hi hoon ya tum bhi ho!

wao :)

S.786 · July 2, 2008, 7:50am

Re: Bait Bazi Month of July 2008

wo hi tu sab sy ziyada tha nukta cheen mera

ju muskura k hamesha galay lagaay mujhy....

ye

_dArd · July 2, 2008, 12:28pm

yOn Kis Trah Katey Ga kaRii dhOop Ka Safar
Sar Par Khyaal e Yaar Kii Chaadar Hi Ley Chalien

"nOon"

S.786 · July 2, 2008, 6:33pm

Re: Bait Bazi Month of July 2008

na maen tum sy koi ummeed rakhhon dilnawazi ki

na tum meri taraf dekho ghalat andaaz nazron say

ye

Shab-e-Hijar · July 2, 2008, 6:42pm

yaad karney ke siwa ab kar bhi kya saktey hain
bhool janey mein tujhey nakaam ho janey ke baad

daal :)

redidentity · July 3, 2008, 4:13am

Re: Bait Bazi Month of July 2008

Do Chaar Lafz Keh Ke Main Khamosh Ho Gaya
Wo Muskura Ke Bolay, Buhat Boltay Ho Tum

'Meem'

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · July 3, 2008, 6:40am

muhabbat meiN nahiN hey farQ jiiney aur marney kaa **
**usii ko dekh kar jiite haiN jis kaafir pe dam nikaley

Ye''

S.786 · July 3, 2008, 8:05am

Re: Bait Bazi Month of July 2008

ye tu mera naseeb hy,aap sy kuch gila nhin

aap k darr sy kiya othhon,dil ko husla nahin

noon

_dArd · July 3, 2008, 10:31am

Re: Bait Bazi Month of July 2008

Na JAaney Kaisey Naii rUtOn Mein Puraanii YaadOn Ki Naao dOobii
Nazar Key Dariya Mein Aaney Waala Ubaal Kitna Ajeeb Sa Tha

"Alif"

Shumaisa · July 3, 2008, 1:27pm

Re: Bait Bazi Month of July 2008

Adab ki had mein hon main be-adab nahin hota
tumhara tazkara ab roz-o-shabb nahinn hotaa
kabhi kabhi tou chalak parrti hain yunhi ankhain
udaas honayy kaa koiii sababb nahinn hotaa...

Alif

_dArd · July 3, 2008, 8:01pm

Aa Ja Key Teray Qeemtii Waadey Pey mOut kO
Taala hAi hUm Ney Aaj baRey Ikhtamaam Sey

"yee"

redidentity · July 4, 2008, 4:33am

Re: Bait Bazi Month of July 2008

Yuun Phir Raha Hai Kaach Ka Paikar Leay Huay
Ghaafil Ko Ye Gumaan Hai Ke Pathar Na Aye Ga

'Alif'

Shumaisa · July 4, 2008, 11:26am

Re: Bait Bazi Month of July 2008

Ab saa'ye mein jaltay hain parinde b shajar b
ab dhoop k mausam pe qayamat nahi kartay

Yeh

redidentity · July 4, 2008, 11:50am

Re: Bait Bazi Month of July 2008

Yuun Aur Bhi Haseen Ho Jaye
Wo Ger Udaas Ho Bethay

'Ye'

Shumaisa · July 4, 2008, 11:57am

Re: Bait Bazi Month of July 2008

Yeh taire sheher mein kaisi hawa chali hai ke ab
wafa ki sab ko talab haii wafaa ka paass nahinn

Noon

_dArd · July 4, 2008, 3:07pm

Na SamatOn Mein Tapash GhUley Na Nazar kO Waqf e Azaab Kar
jO Sunaaii Dey Usey ChUp Sikha jO Dikhaaii Dey Usey Khwaab Kar

"Rey"