Bait Bazi - March | NEW RULE

Koyal · March 17, 2011, 11:46am

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pattaa-pattaa buuTaa-buuTaa haal hamaaraa jaane hai
jaane na jaane gul hii na jaane, baaG to saaraa jaane hai

hey or ye

cutenice62 · March 17, 2011, 12:41pm

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yeh udaas udaas se bazm-o-dar yeh ujaar ujaar si rahguzar....
chalo hum nahin, na sahi magar sar-e koo-e yaar koi to ho....

Amarbail · March 17, 2011, 1:16pm

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Woh aankhain jheel si ghehri tau hain magar
In mein koi aks mere naam ka nahe ...

Next: "Noon"

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · March 17, 2011, 3:00pm

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Na mere qalam se likhi gai, na meri zuban se ada huwi
Jo nazar se kehnay ki baat hai kisi harf mein na samaye gi
Koi phool chunta hai kis leye, koi dhool hota hai kis tarah
Yeh waqt waqt ki baat hai, tujhey zindagi bataye gi ...

ehsan · March 17, 2011, 3:08pm

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wah. :k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · March 17, 2011, 3:10pm

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Thanks:D

Naina11 · March 17, 2011, 4:17pm

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**Gum-ghasta mohabbat kay khuwabon ki tarah hay
Woh rooh kay sehra main sarabon ki tarah hay
Woh zeest kay maqtab main nisaabon ki tarah hay
Parhta hon ussay roz, kitaabon ki tarah hay

Hay/ Yay**

ehsan · March 17, 2011, 7:10pm

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**hur manzil-e-hayaat se gum kar gayaa mujhe
murr murr kay raah mein woh teraa dekhnaa mujhe

Meem/ye
**

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · March 17, 2011, 9:35pm

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mujhse tu puchne aya hai wafa k ma'ni
ye teri sada dili mar na daley mujh ko
kal ki bat aur hai main ab sa rahun ya na rahun
jitna jii chahey teraa yaj sataley mujh ko

kala pathar'' ya wela baba
:-p

ehsan · March 17, 2011, 9:38pm

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^ Jee zara yeh toh bataa diya karein kay konsay ilaaz say agla shair shuru kiya jaye. :D

ehsan · March 17, 2011, 9:39pm

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**waqt joh mere ikhtiyaar mein thaa
main usii waqt ke hisaar mein thaa

Tey/Alif
**

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · March 17, 2011, 9:42pm

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acha ji :~)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · March 17, 2011, 9:49pm

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**Aaj palkoN ki munderoN pe bohat raunaq hai
deikh saktay ho to ashkoN ka charaagaN deikho..!!

daal'' / wao''
**

ehsan · March 17, 2011, 9:54pm

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beautiful. :k:

ehsan · March 17, 2011, 9:56pm

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**dard kee baarish sahi maddham zara aahista chal
dil kee mitti hai abhi tak nam zara aahista chal

che/laam
**

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · March 17, 2011, 10:13pm

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**shukriya :-)

laut kar jauN ga to sab gaThriyaaN khangaaleN ge
aaNkh meiN chubhti hui gard-e-safar deikhe ga kaun

''kaaf'' / noon''**

ehsan · March 17, 2011, 10:18pm

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**koi phuul bun gaya hai koi chaand koi taara
joh chiraag bujh gaye hain teri anjuman mein jal kay

kaaf/ye
**

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · March 17, 2011, 10:24pm

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**YuN barasti haiN tassawur maiN purani yadaiN
jaisay barsaat maiN rim-jhim ka samaaN hota hai

he'' ye''**

ehsan · March 17, 2011, 10:32pm

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**yeh bhi waqt aanaa tha aab to gosh har aavaaz hai
aur mere barbaad-e-dil mein sadaa koi nahin

noon/noon. :D
**

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · March 17, 2011, 10:41pm

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**Na Ye Zindagii merii zindagii na yeh daastaaN meri daastaaN
maiN Khyaal-o-weham say door huN mujhay aaj koi Sada na de

'daal' ye'
**