Bait Bazi - July 2013

LP · June 30, 2013, 8:40pm

Rules of Bait Bazi:

Shair should be genuine and not your own.
Dont break the chain and always follow the last letter of the last word or the first letter of the last word of the posted shair.
Try to mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair.
If you know the name of the poet, mention that .
Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max is allowed.

Let’s start with this sher :

Afsurdagi hai magar wajah-e-gham nahi maloom
Keh Dil pe bojh sa hai ranj-e-besabab ki tarah.

cutenice62 · July 1, 2013, 8:55am

Re: Bait Bazi - July 2013

Taq-e-shab may jalay jis qadar jal sakay...
Kiya zaroori tha kay hum bhi sahar dekhtay...

cutenice62 · July 3, 2013, 6:52am

Re: Bait Bazi - July 2013

Ye Sab Rastay K Sathi thay inhein Aakhir Bicharna tha
Chalo Ab Ghar Chalen jana Bohat Aawargi Kar Li

cutenice62 · July 3, 2013, 7:27pm

Re: Bait Bazi - July 2013

Ye to ek zid hai k Mohsin main shikayat na kerun !
Warna shikway to hain etnay mere yaar k bus !

muqawwee123 · July 5, 2013, 6:10am

Re: Bait Bazi - July 2013

silsile pyar ke, hosle haar ke, dher ash'aar ke
ye assasa Muzaffar hai shayar ka, anjaam shayar ka hai

he / ye

(poet: Muzaffar Warsi)

cutenice62 · July 5, 2013, 6:18am

Re: Bait Bazi - July 2013

Yaqeen Tumko Meri Baaton Pe Akhir Kyun Nahi Aata,
Khudara Maan Jao Tum,, Mujhe Tanhayi Dasti Hai,

muqawwee123 · July 5, 2013, 6:27am

Re: Bait Bazi - July 2013

hum jaise dil jale Muzaffar jante hain
poosheeda her kook main hai koyal ki aag

alif / gaaf

cutenice62 · July 5, 2013, 6:52am

Re: Bait Bazi - July 2013

Aaya Hee Tha Abhi Mere Lab Pe Wafaa Ka Naam
Kuch Doston Ne Haath Mein Pathar Uthaa Lye…!

Diva · July 6, 2013, 3:51am

Re: Bait Bazi - July 2013

yahii haalaat ibtadaa se rahe
log hamase Khafaa Khafaa se rahe

tarash · July 10, 2013, 3:04pm

Re: Bait Bazi - July 2013

Rahi ye aas key serab ho gi kasht-e-hayat..
So johar’on ko bhi dariya-e-neel likhtey rahey.

ray/yeh

muqawwee123 · July 10, 2013, 3:13pm

Re: Bait Bazi - July 2013

ye aarzoo thi tumhe gul ke ru-baro karte
hum aur bul_bul-e-betaab guftagu karte

tarash · July 11, 2013, 12:37pm

Re: Bait Bazi - July 2013

Ye kis muqaam pey pohncha dia zamaney ney,
Kay ab hayat pey tera bhi ikhtayar nahi.

noon

Sahir ludhyanvi

tarash · July 18, 2013, 5:43pm

Re: Bait Bazi - July 2013

Nigah barq nahi chehra aftaab nahi,
Wo admi hai magar dekhney ki taab nahi

noon

tarash · July 21, 2013, 1:01pm

Re: Bait Bazi - July 2013

Nigaah parrti hai phir kyun paraayi shamon par,
Agar aziz hai Mohsin chiraagh khana humain..

hey/noon

jiia · July 21, 2013, 4:12pm

Re: Bait Bazi - July 2013

hawa k dosh pe rakhe chargh thy ham
jo bujh gaey to hawa se shikaeten kese

kaaf/ye

tarash · July 21, 2013, 5:41pm

Re: Bait Bazi - July 2013

Yeh Afsana-e-Mohabbat, Yeh Kahaniyan Wafa Ki,
Koi Or Zikr Cherro, Mera Dil Lahoo Lahoo Hai.

hey/yeh

khansadath · July 22, 2013, 5:46am

Re: Bait Bazi - July 2013

Hum ne Wafa ke naam per sub kuch loota diya
Laikin zaraa bata naseeb! tu ne kiya diya....!
**
**Aleef

tarash · July 22, 2013, 5:15pm

Re: Bait Bazi - July 2013

Iss baat ka malaal hai, shikwa nahin mujhe,
Wo shaks paas reh kr bhi samjha nahin mujhe…

meem/yeh

khansadath · July 23, 2013, 6:54am

Re: Bait Bazi - July 2013

Main to Mar k Bhi Bazm-E-Wafa Main Zinda hoon!
Talaash Kar Meri Mehfil, Mera Mazaar Na Pooch!!

Pay/hay

tarash · July 23, 2013, 5:43pm

Re: Bait Bazi - July 2013

Phir Qafas Mein Shor Utha Qaidyon Ka Aur Sayyaad
Dekhna Urra De Ga Phir Khabar Rihaayi Ki

kaaf/yeh