Bait Bazi-III 2006

Amal · August 23, 2006, 2:39pm

Rules of Bait Bazi:

Shair should be genuine and not your own. Post your own in Bait Bazi — Personal Edition of Sho’ra-e-Gupshup.
Dont break the chain and always follow the last letter of the last posted shair.
Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair.
If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).
Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max will be allowed.
Avoid posting film songs.

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · August 23, 2006, 6:29pm

Re: Bait Bazi-III 2006

Yaas kay barrey samandar meiN ik aas ki kashtii chohti si
toofaaN ki taqat andha -dhuhnd aur meri hasti chohti si
badal kay bipherey toloN ko koi kaesey ja ke samjhaaey
is baarish mein kahin beh na jaaey meri basti chohti sii
Ye''

ghazal_kisi_ke · August 24, 2006, 12:37am

Re: Bait Bazi-III 2006

**yeh mana aur bhi tum ko jaha'n main hayn bohut say ghum,
magar duniya kay maylo'n main hamayn mut bhool jana tum

mere ishaa'ar hayn jitnay tumharey naam karta hoon,
ghazal meri suno jab bhi ghazal mein doob jana tum **

-MEEM-

kaleemhk · August 24, 2006, 6:01am

Re: Bait Bazi-III 2006

Mujay tumhari judai ka koi ranj nahin
Mere khayal ki duniya mein mere paas ho tum

Again................."MeeM"

Amal · August 24, 2006, 9:50am

Re: Bait Bazi-III 2006

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Mohabbat keh'kashaaN to hey magar aksar ye deikha hey
zara si dhoop nikalney par nazaarey toot jaatey heiN
subha meiN utth kar deikh to kaheiN malba nahi lekin
kai chup-chaap andherey meiN sitaarey toot jaatey heiN

(By: Amal)

"Noon"
**

kaleemhk · August 24, 2006, 10:15am

Re: Bait Bazi-III 2006

Nazron se agar door hai to kia hua
Dharkan ki tarha dil k meray paas bohat hai
Wo raat ki tareeki main karta hai mujh se baat
Us ko meri tanhaai ka ehsaas bohat hai

"Ye"

lutfullah · August 24, 2006, 10:34am

Re: Bait Bazi-III 2006

[qoute=Meer Taqi Meer]

"Yaaro mujhey muaaf rakho, main nashey mein hoon!
** Ab do to jaam e khaali hi do, main nashey mein hoon!**
** Kya jaane kah gayaa main, nashey mein, khabar naheen!**
** Mera na kuchh khayaal karo, main nashey mein hoon!**

** "Noon"**

kaleemhk · August 24, 2006, 10:49am

Re: Bait Bazi-III 2006

Naye dewanoon ko daikhoon tou khushi hoti hai
Hum bhi aisay thay jub aye they wiraney mein

Again "NooN"

lutfullah · August 24, 2006, 1:22pm

Re: Bait Bazi-III 2006

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[quote=Bahadur Shah Zafar]
**

"Nikalnaa dil se, is paikaan ka, mushkil hai, to bas yeh hai!
Meri jaan hai, to bas yeh hai, mera dil hai, to bas yeh hai!
Jo qasd e manzil e maqsood hai, to ishq paida kar!
Keh is manzil mein ae dil, meer e manzil hai, to bas yeh hai!"

"Ye"

mahamkhan · August 24, 2006, 5:18pm

Re: Bait Bazi-III 2006

Yeh kuch din hain ke iis ko yaad har aake shaam karna hai
Phir apney dil ki basti mein iisey gumnaam karna hai

"Ye"

lutfullah · August 24, 2006, 6:00pm

Re: Bait Bazi-III 2006

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[quote=Faiz Ahmad Faiz]
**

"Yun arz o talab se kab ae dil, patthar dil paani hotey hain?
Tum laakh razaa ki khoo daalo, kab khoo e sitamgar jaati hai?

Bedaad garon ki basti hai, yaan daad kahaan? Khairaat kahaan?
Sar phorti phirti hai naadaan, faryaad jo dar dar jaati hai!"

"Ye"

rabia_rana · August 24, 2006, 9:17pm

Re: Bait Bazi-III 2006

yaro'n naye mausam nay ye ahsan kiye hain
ab yaad mujhay dard puranay nahi atay
"YAY"

lutfullah · August 24, 2006, 10:01pm

Re: Bait Bazi-III 2006

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[quote=Badshah Bahadur Shah Zafar]
**

"Yeh us shah e khoobi ka ajab zaabta dekha!
Karta hai woh be jurm o khataa, dil ka makaan zabt!
Aati hai hansi us ko mere rone pe kya kya! **
**Karta hai magar sharm se woh, ghuncha dahaan zabt!"

"Toe"
Lo aur kar lo baat! He! He!

kaleemhk · August 25, 2006, 3:39am

Re: Bait Bazi-III 2006

Tabi-aat hai k theri ja rahi hai
Zam'aana hai k guzra ja raha hai

(Jigar Murad Aabadi)

"Ye"

lutfullah · August 25, 2006, 8:26am

Re: Bait Bazi-III 2006

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[Quote=Khwaja Haidar Ali Aatish Lakhnavi]
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"Yeh aarzoo thi tujhe gul ke ru-ba-ru kartey!
** Hum aur bulbul e betaab, guftugu kartey!**
** Payaambar na muyassar hua to khoob hua!**
** Zubaan e ghair se kya sharh e aarzu kartey!**

** "Ye"**

Amal · August 25, 2006, 11:41am

Re: Bait Bazi-III 2006

**YadeiN, udaas aankheiN aur aek dil bujha bujha
jaatey huwey wo kitney inamaat dey gaya

"Alif"
**

Bholay_Bisray · August 25, 2006, 1:43pm

Re: Bait Bazi-III 2006

arq kii buu.nd us kii zulf se ruKhasaar par Tapakii
taajjub kii hai jaage ye pa.Dii Khurshiid par shabnam
hame.n to baaG tujh bin Khaanaa-e-maatam nazar ayaa
idhar gul phaarate the jeb, rotii thii udhar shabanam

"MeeM"

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · August 25, 2006, 2:53pm

Re: Bait Bazi-III 2006

Masoom sey chehrey pe hay kuch aesi nazakat
jaesey shabnam ki hatheli pe koi phool khila hay

Ye''

Bholay_Bisray · August 25, 2006, 4:34pm

Re: Bait Bazi-III 2006

ye judaa_iyo.n ke raste ba.Dii duur tak gaye hai.n
jo gayaa vo phir na lauTaa merii baat maan jaao

"Wavo"

Precious_Khan · August 26, 2006, 9:43am

Re: Bait Bazi-III 2006

Woh mahrabaa'n hay tou Iqraar Kiyun naheen karta
Woh Badgumaa'n hay tou saw baar azma'ey mujhay ...( saw = 100 times )

Yay