Bait Bazi-II 2006

Amal · August 10, 2006, 2:13pm

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

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YahaaN kon kisi ka hota hey
sab rishtey, naatey jhootey heiN
sab dil rakhney ki baateiN heiN
sab asli roop chupaatey heiN

"Noon"

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NikamiJano · August 10, 2006, 6:28pm

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

na milta naqad jaa'N day kaR bhi ik lamha mohabat ka
giRaa'N tha is qadaR soo'daa hum bazaR choR aa'ey

"ye"

goodnews · August 11, 2006, 4:30am

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

B.A Amal:k:

goodnews · August 11, 2006, 4:35am

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

***yad nahin kya kya dekha tha sary manzar bhul gay ***
us ki galiyon se jab lauty apana bhi ghar bhul gay
***Khub gaye pardes ky apane diivaar-o-dar bhuul gay ***
shiish-mahal ny aisa ghyraa mitti ke ghar bhuul gay
(Nazer Baqri)
“y” :peshow:

Bholay_Bisray · August 11, 2006, 7:15am

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

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ye kis maqaam pe laa_ii hai merii tanahaa_ii
ke mujh se aaj ko_ii bad_gumaa.N nahii.n hotaa
mai.n us ko bhuul gayaa huu.N ye kaun maanegaa
kisii charaaG ke bas me.n dhuaa.N nahii.n hotaa

"AliF"

Amal · August 11, 2006, 11:45am

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

Thanx goodnews

Nice one NikamiJi :k:

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Usi ishq sey usi chaah sey, usi pyaar sey usi maan sey
merey haath meiN koi gulaab do, meiN bohat dinoN sey udaas hooN

“Noon”
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GuL-e-Tasbeeh · August 11, 2006, 12:47pm

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

Na dey takleef khud ko tuu khudaara
milay ga kuch nahi Aah-o-fughaaN sey
merey hathon hi ujraa hay gulistaaN
mujhay shikwa nahi kuch baaghbaaN sey

Ye''

Amal · August 11, 2006, 1:28pm

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

Yunhi to shaakh sey pattey gira nahi kartey
bicharr ke log ziaada jiaa nahi kartey

"Ye"

Bholay_Bisray · August 11, 2006, 1:30pm

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

ye kinaaro.n se khelane vaale
Duub jaaye.n to kyaa tamaashaa ho
aaj ham bhii terii vafaao.n par
muskuraaye.n to kyaa tamaashaa ho

"Wavo"

goodnews · August 11, 2006, 6:42pm

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

Parveen Shakir ny kia khub kaha,
Woh qahty husn hy ky sabhi khush jmal log
Lagta hy kohy qaaf py rehty hain in dinon!
Ik khushgwar neend py haq mera ban giya
Woh rat jagy is ankh ny katy hain in dinon

NOON:peshow:

ghazal_kisi_ke · August 11, 2006, 9:40pm

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

Na tu zameen ke liye hai na asman ke liye
Jahan hai tere liye tu nahin jahan ke liye

-Yeh-

I didn't know that. I had that sher starting with "yeh". Thanx for the correction.

kaleemhk · August 12, 2006, 3:42am

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

Ye Phool Mujhey Koi Virasat Main Miley Hain
Tum Nay Mara Kanto'n Bhara Bistar Nahi Dekha

"Alif"

hans-mukh · August 12, 2006, 5:37pm

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

IN BAARISHOON SEY DOSTI ACHI NAHI FARAZ
KACHA TERA MAKAAN HEY KUCH TU KHAYAL KER

next letter:R

Bholay_Bisray · August 12, 2006, 6:35pm

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

raushan jamaal-e-yaar se hai anjuman tamaam
dahakaa huaa hai aatish-e-gul se chaman tamaam
hairat Guruur-e-husn se shoKhii se iztaraab
dil ne bhii tere siikh liye hai.n chalan tamaam

"MeeM"

goodnews · August 12, 2006, 9:00pm

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

Muddai Lakh bura chahy tu kia hota hy
Wohi hota hy ju manzory khuda hota hy
"Y"

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · August 12, 2006, 9:06pm

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

mein nay kabhi jo dekhey hein sapnay bahaar kay
manzar nazar mein ghoom gaey khaar-zaar kay
detey hein mujhay bhook mein raahat wuhi samar
toraa tha jin ko mein kabhii sang maar kay :-(

goodnews · August 12, 2006, 9:10pm

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

GT ap ka shyr buhat acha hy magar pehly mera shyr aya hy "Ye" sy laiy

ghazal_kisi_ke · August 12, 2006, 10:37pm

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

*Youn to main hans para hon tumahray liay magar
Kitnay sitaray toot paray eik hasi kay sath *
---Mohsin Niqvi---

-HAY- ???

Bholay_Bisray · August 13, 2006, 9:17am

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

ham saadaa hii aise the, kii yuu.N hii paziiraa_ii
jis baar Khizaa.N aa_ii, samajhe ki bahaar aa_ii
aashob-e-nazar se kii hamane chamn-aaraa_ii
jo shay bhii nazar aa_ii gul-rang nazar aa_ii

"Ye"

Amal · August 13, 2006, 11:05am

Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006

ghazal kisi ke :k:

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Ye bhi agar khataa hey to be’shak khataa sahi
apna samajh ke tujh ko pukaara kabhi kabhi

“Ye”
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