Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
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Bari khush fahmi hy zalim,Any way; Shyr acha hy,
***ye alag baat hai saaqii ky mujhy hosh nahin ***
***hosh itanaa hai ki main tujh sy faraamosh nahin ***
(Shair Namaloom)
Noon :peshow:
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
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Bari khush fahmi hy zalim,Any way; Shyr acha hy,
***ye alag baat hai saaqii ky mujhy hosh nahin ***
***hosh itanaa hai ki main tujh sy faraamosh nahin ***
(Shair Namaloom)
Noon :peshow:
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
Na saleeqa mujh mein Kaleem ka, na qareena tukjh mein Khaleel ka
Main halaak-e-jaadu-e-saamri, tu qateel-e-shewa-e-aazari
ye
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
ZZ =(Zabrdast Zalim),
***yeh jannat mubaarak rahy zahidon ko ***
ky main aap kaa samana chahata hon
*(Allama Iqbal )I would like to share first shyr of this Ghazal also as I like that a lot *
Tery Ishq ki inteha chata hon
Mari sadgi dykh kia chahta hon
Noon:peshow:
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
Shukria GN, Iqbal is my Most Fav.
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Nishtar hai mere hath mein,kaandhon pe mai-kada
Lo main ilaaj-e-dard-e-jigar le k aa gaya. . . . . . . . !
alif
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
Wah Wah Wah Zamil Mukhlis ZZ again;loot liya mushaira aj tu kia shyr hy**,**Mujhy mandrja zyl shyr buhat pasand hy magar shair ka nam maloom nahi hy,
Aj tu ham ko pagal kh lo pathar phynko tanz kro
Ishaq ki bazzi khyl nahi hy khylo gy tu haro gy
“YE”:peshow:
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
Huzoor, Kuch LoVE Ghalib se bhi kar lijye, aur Unki Islaah To Na Kijye,
HAR EK BAAT PE KAHTE HO TUM KE TU KIYA HAI
dARWESH
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Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
ye asmaan wala hi akhir kabhi baatayega
key wafa shuaron ka hasil kion hey tanhayi
**
**-YEH-
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
' KOI BATLAYE KE HUM BATLAAIN KIYA ??
Yeh Tumhara Farz Tha Kashti Bachaa Lete Meri
** Doobne Waale Ko Kab Hota Hai Sahil Ka Lehaaz !**
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
Wah buhat hi khub![]()
***zaKhm ko phool tu sar sar ko saba kahaty hain ***
***jane kya daur hai kya log hain kya kahate hain ***
***kyaa qayamat hai ky jin ke liye ruk ruk ky chaly ***
***ab vahii log hamen abalapa kahaty hain ***
(Fraz)
Noon:peshow:
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
Darwesh jee, aap ne to gall hi muka d hai… ![]()
Khair jee, ham nikaalte hain sab ko is mushkil se…
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Zarf paimaana hai qadd o qaamat-e-insaan ka !
Vaar dushman par jo karna hai, karo ehsaan ka !
alif
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
GN !
"Lehaaz" ze pe nahi zoyen pe khatam hota hai :)
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
Jab main nikal chuki thi tu phir???![]()
Ham ny tu or phnsa di kashti hahahaha
Shukriy atasih ka.
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
Zamil Mukhlis sahib bja frmaya,
**Bilkul Muazrat Urdu hurofy Tahaji hi bhol gay.After all Senior Citizens ki saf main shamil ho gay yad dasht tu mtasir ho gi hi.Shukrya ham shyr wapis lyty hain.:) **
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
Is bar Zy Iqbal ka shyr hy,
Aik hi saf main khry ho gay Mehmood o Ayaz
Na koi bandda rha na bannda nawwaz
:peshow:
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
Zikar Unka He Sahii Bazam Main Bettay Ho Farraz
Dard Jitna Bhee Utthay Hath Na Dill Per Aaye
Ahmad Faraz
"YE"
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
Ye sabhi veeraaniyan us k juda hone se theen......
Aankh dhundlaai hui thi shehr dhundlaayaa na tha
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**alif
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
Ye sabhi veeraaniyan us k juda hone se theen......
Aankh dhundlaai hui thi shehr dhundlaayaa na tha
alif
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*Very Nice :) *
Andaaz Apna Aaeynay Mian Dekhtay Hain Wo
Or Ye Bhii Daykhtay Hain Koi Daykhta Na Ho
"Waoo"
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
Andaaz Apna Aaeynay Mian Dekhtay Hain Wo Or Ye Bhii Daykhtay Hain Koi Daykhta Na Ho
Thats my favourite... :)
Wo mila to sadiyon k baad bhi mere lab pe koi gila na tha
Usey meri chup ne rula dia jise guftgu mein kamaal tha
alif
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
Apnay hee roag ka ilaj naheeN
YooN to her dard kee dwa hooN maiN
"NooN'
Re: Bait Bazi-II 2006
na is shahar-e-behis ko seharaa kaho
suno ik hamaaraa bhii ghar hai yahaa.N
palak bhii jhapakate ho "Makhmoor" kyuu.N
tamaashaa bahut muKhtasar hai yahaa.N
"NooN"