Nain
February 28, 2014, 12:35pm
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scores 1 march
girls 448 (till post 226)
**LAst day **
1758 (till posts 1112)
Game Rulez
Moniter Girlz boys ki posting or Boys Girls ki Posting check kerein gey… **her din ka score her thread main post kar dia jae ga, her 24 ghante baad. girls thread ki checking muqawee aur boys thread ki checking fariha kare gi. aur donon monitors mistakes identify kar ke ek doosre ko PM kar denge. Agar aap apne thread main koi mistake dekhen to apne team members ko bata den taake checking se pehle sahi kia ja sake. checking ka time hone ke baad, edit ki gai post consider nahin ki jae gi. checking will be conducted everyday 11 pm (Pak time).
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points and negative points
Thread mae extra comments se -1 hu jaye ga
Chain nahi thorny hai mistake ke -2
poetry post kerny hai koi ulta seedha shair nahi..
pages count nahi kerney hain poetry pey dehaan dein sab .. ke zyda pages se hum jeet jayein gey :nono:
one more thing …
Last words
aakhri lafz agar dil hai to ‘daal’ ya ‘laam’ se shair likh sakte hain
hain (hey ya nun gunna )
YE .( tu jis ke under do noqtey hutey hain us se )
hum (hey ya meem )
hai (hey or ye )
dil ( Laam/daal)
raha (rey/ alif )
All other boys and girls can post in their respective threads .
**last date 5 march 2014 **
**Girlz Team **
FAriha (Monitor)
**JIA
khubsoorat
pakiza
madzz
khamosh girl
blue eyez
Micro
lets start
**Mitt Jaye ga Gunahoo Ka Tasawur is Jaahan Say, IQBAL
Agar Ho jaye ‘Yaqeen’ K Khuda Daik Raha Hai…
**
hey/ye**
re: Bait Bazi (Girls Team) - Last Day
Hathoan ki lakiron pay mat ja ai Galib
Naseeb un k bi hote hain jin k hath nehen hote
hey/ye
re: Bait Bazi (Girls Team) - Last Day
***Har taraf chaa Gaye paigham-e-mohabbat ban kar
Mujh se achi Rahi qismat meray afsanon kii...
Kaaf/ye***
re: Bait Bazi (Girls Team) - Last Day
Kitni hasrat thi, tujhe pass bitha ker rotay,
Ab yeh yeh mushkil hai, tere samne roye kese…
Ahmed nadeem qasmi
Kaaf/ye
re: Bait Bazi (Girls Team) - Last Day
Ye Jo Sargashta Se Phirtay Hain Kitaabon Waalay
In Se Mat Mil Ke Inhain Rog Hain Khwaabon Waalay
ye/ye
re: Bait Bazi (Girls Team) - Last Day
***yo.n lage dost teraa mujhase Khafaa ho jaanaa
jis tarah phuul se Khushbuu kaa judaa ho jaanaa
Alif/jeem***
madz124
February 28, 2014, 7:13pm
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re: Bait Bazi (Girls Team) - Last Day
apane taaii.n to har gha.Dii Gam hai, aalam hai, daaG hai
yaad kare hame.n kabhii kab ye tujhe dimaaG hai
Hay/ye
re: Bait Bazi (Girls Team) - Last Day
Hum ne maana ke bohat dair hai hashar aney tak,
Chaar janib teri aahat ho to soyen kese, …
Ahmed nadeem qasmi
Kaaf/ye
re: Bait Bazi (Girls Team) - Last Day
Kahan tak suney gi raat kahan tak sunayen ge hum,
Shikwey saarey sabb aaj tere rubaruu karain
faiz ahmed
kaaf/ noon
re: Bait Bazi (Girls Team) - Last Day
***Kuch waqt ki rawani ne Hamein yun badal dia
Wafa par ab bhi qaim hain, par mohabbat chor di ham ne....
Noon/ye***
re: Bait Bazi (Girls Team) - Last Day
Na shaaor mein jawani, na khayal mein rawani
Koi sun ke kya karega meri dukh bhari kahani
Ahmed nadeem qasmi
Kaaf/ye
Pakiiza
February 28, 2014, 7:36pm
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re: Bait Bazi (Girls Team) - Last Day
Yeh dais hay indhay logon ka,
Aye chand yahan na nikla kar,
Habib Jalib
Kaaf / Ray
re: Bait Bazi (Girls Team) - Last Day
***Kabhi pathar se bhi takraye to kharash tak na aye
kabhi ek Baat hi se insan toot ke Bikhar jatay hain...
Hey/noon***
Pakiiza
February 28, 2014, 7:48pm
14
re: Bait Bazi (Girls Team) - Last Day
Faiz Ahmad Faiz Poetry
Ham Parwarish-e-Loh-o-Qalam Kartay Rahain Ge
Jo Dil Pe Guzarti Hai, Raqam Kartay Rahain Ge
Asbaab-e-Gham-e-Ishq Behem Kartay Rahain Ge
Veeraani-e-Dauraan Pe Qaram Kartay Rahain Ge
Gaaf/ yeh
re: Bait Bazi (Girls Team) - Last Day
***Yaad karay jab mujh ko Teri tanhaye
Dekha karna guldano ko shaam ke baad...
Bey/daal***
Pakiiza
February 28, 2014, 8:07pm
16
re: Bait Bazi (Girls Team) - Last Day
Faiz Ahmad Faiz Poetry
Bara hai dard ka rishta, Yeh dil ghareeb sahi,
Tumhare naam pe aayen ge ghamgusaar chale..
re: Bait Bazi (Girls Team) - Last Day
***Ye shararat bhara lehja to meri adat hai
tu har ek Baat pe yun nam na Kia kar ankhain...
Alif/noon***
Pakiiza
February 28, 2014, 8:16pm
18
re: Bait Bazi (Girls Team) - Last Day
Noon/ Yeh
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Nain
February 28, 2014, 8:51pm
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re: Bait Bazi (Girls Team) - Last Day
Nikal aty hain ansu rone se pehly,
Toot jate hain? sab khawb sone se pehly,
pey/ye
re: Bait Bazi (Girls Team) - Last Day
***Yaad hai mujh ko tu kaha karti hai
sachi mohabbat ka sabot hotay hain ansoo....
Alif/noon***