Bait Bazi - February

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Jis Nay Pathar Kay Khilaunon Say Mujhay Behlaya

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bach nikalate haiN agar atih-e-sayyad se ham
shola-e-atish-e-gulfam sey jal jate haiN
shamma jis aag mein jalti hai numaish k liye
ham ussi ag mein gumnam sey jal jate haiN

'he' noon'

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na deed ha na sukhan , ab na koi hurf ha na payaam
koi bhi heela-e-taskeen naheen aur aas bahut ha
umeed-e-yaar ,nazar ka mizaj ,derd ka rang
tum aaj kuch bhi na poocho kay dil udaas bahut ha

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Hijr K Mausam Me Ye Barish Ka Barasna Kaisa?
Ik Sehra Sy Samandar Ka Guzarna Kesa?
Ay Mery Dil Na Pareshan Ho Tanha Ho Kar,
Wo Tery Sath Chala Kab Tha, Bicharna Kaisa?
Log Kehty Hain Gulshan Ki Tabahi Dekho,
Me To Veraan Sa Jungle Tha, Ujarna Kaisa?
Dekhny Me To Koi Dard Nahi, Dukh Bhi Nahi,
Phir Ye Ankhon Me Youn Askhon Ka Ubharna Kaisa?
Be-Wafa Kehny Ki Jurat Bhi Na Karna Us Ko,
Us Ny Iqrar Kia Kab Tha, Mukarna Kaisa?

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Poori Ghazal khich maari :hayaa:

Khud ko yun mahsur kar kay baithi hun apni zaat mein
manzilain charon taraf hai rasta koee nahin

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We cant do tht in here ?

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In Bait Bazi we don’t write whole poetry :cobra: But if you ve done No problem aap par koi case naheen honay walla :hehe:

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Ok:bummer:

Haaye Andaaz tere Rukney Ka
Waqt Ko bhi Ruka Ruka Dekha

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ankh nam na kar mere dard ki khatir ai mahboob
tere ek ansoo per mere hazar dard qurban hon

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Hoton pe hasee dekh li ,dil ke ander nahi dekha

Yaaron ne mere gam ka samander nahi dekha

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Aah ko chahye aik umr asar honay tak
Kaun jita hay teri zulf kay sar honay tak

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^ love tht one

tumhaare Gam kaa mausam hai abhii tak

lab-e-tashnaa pe shabanam hai abhii tak

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:hat:
kabhi aye haqiqat-e munrazir nazr aa libas-e mijaz main
ke hazaron sajday tarap rahay hain teri jabeen-e niyaz main

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Werent u supposed to start with "tak"?

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actually we have new rule that we can start with first letter or last letter of the last word so these letters are "Tay" and "kaaf"

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:eek: Sannan’s post without smiley.

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Haven’t you read my replies in Cafe :emmy:

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Oh ok

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aab koi sher bhi likh day :aj:

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Kaha tha naa...? Humen aik khwab rehne do...

Bohat he shoq tha tum ko

Humara dil dukhane ka

Musalsal chott ki zad per

Humen taqseem karne ka

Humen mitti bana ker rait main

Tajseem karne ka...!

Chalo khush ho gaye na ab…?