Bait Bazi - February 2014 (Parveen Shakir Ashaar only)

madz124 · February 1, 2014, 10:04pm

Re: Bait Bazi - February 2014 (Parveen Shakir Ashaar only)

Yeh ghurbaten meri aankhon main kaisi utri hain
Ke khwaab bhi mere rukhsat hain rat-jaga bhi gaya

Muqawwee, yeh sab ashaar memory se likh rahe hain?

muqawwee123 · February 1, 2014, 10:08pm

Re: Bait Bazi - February 2014 (Parveen Shakir Ashaar only)

yes 70% from memory.. using google for correct shair and avoid writing myself.

Aise Mausam Bhi Guzare Ham Ne
Subhen Jab Apni Thin Shamain Us Ki

kaaf/ye

madz124 · February 1, 2014, 10:16pm

Re: Bait Bazi - February 2014 (Parveen Shakir Ashaar only)

impressive! i have extremely poor memory. apna likha hua bhi yaad nai rehta.

muqawwee123 · February 1, 2014, 10:17pm

Re: Bait Bazi - February 2014 (Parveen Shakir Ashaar only)

I remember Parveen Shakir's ashaar as most of my favorite poetry by her has been sung

madz124 · February 1, 2014, 10:18pm

Re: Bait Bazi - February 2014 (Parveen Shakir Ashaar only)

yeh tu hai ke mera wahma hai
band aankhon se tujhko tak rahi hon

muqawwee123 · February 1, 2014, 10:19pm

Re: Bait Bazi - February 2014 (Parveen Shakir Ashaar only)

Nind Is Soch Se Tuti Aksar
Kis Tarah Katati Hain Raten Us Ki

kaaf/ye

madz124 · February 1, 2014, 10:19pm

Re: Bait Bazi - February 2014 (Parveen Shakir Ashaar only)

is thread main mere aur apke siwa kisi ne post nai karna?

madz124 · February 1, 2014, 10:20pm

Re: Bait Bazi - February 2014 (Parveen Shakir Ashaar only)

kayi rutoon se mere neem-wa dareechon main
thehar gaya hai tere intezaar ka mausam

muqawwee123 · February 1, 2014, 10:21pm

Re: Bait Bazi - February 2014 (Parveen Shakir Ashaar only)

meri talab tha ik shakhs wo jo nahin mila to phir
hath dua se yun gira bhool betha sawal bhi

be/ye

muqawwee123 · February 1, 2014, 10:27pm

Re: Bait Bazi - February 2014 (Parveen Shakir Ashaar only)

Parveen se log jealosu hain

madz124 · February 1, 2014, 10:28pm

Re: Bait Bazi - February 2014 (Parveen Shakir Ashaar only)

Barf ke haath hi, haath aayenge, ae mauj e hawa
hiddaten mujh main, na khushbu ke badan main, ab ke

muqawwee123 · February 2, 2014, 6:09am

Re: Bait Bazi - February 2014 (Parveen Shakir Ashaar only)

Kuch istarh ka pur israar hai tere lehja
ke jaise raaz kusha ho kisi khazane ka

kaaf/alif

ehsan · February 3, 2014, 7:23am

Re: Bait Bazi - February 2014 (Parveen Shakir Ashaar only)

**kisii ke dhyaan mein duubaa huaa dil
bahaane se mujhe bhii taalataa hai

hey/ye**

_Masoom_Muskaan · February 3, 2014, 10:53am

Re: Bait Bazi - February 2014 (Parveen Shakir Ashaar only)

yaad uss ne kiya hai phir shaid
zakhm risnay laga hai phir shaid

muqawwee123 · February 3, 2014, 11:00am

Re: Bait Bazi - February 2014 (Parveen Shakir Ashaar only)

Dariya bhi jo meri rehguzar ho
Taqdeer e safar hai Tishna kami

_Masoom_Muskaan · February 3, 2014, 11:04am

Re: Bait Bazi - February 2014 (Parveen Shakir Ashaar only)

kaise chhorrain usey tanhai par
harf aata hai maseehaai par

muqawwee123 · February 3, 2014, 11:09am

Re: Bait Bazi - February 2014 (Parveen Shakir Ashaar only)

paas wo jab tak rahe dard thama rehta hai
phelta jata hai phir aankh ke kaajal ki tarah

tuew/ baRi hey

_Masoom_Muskaan · February 3, 2014, 11:27am

Re: Bait Bazi - February 2014 (Parveen Shakir Ashaar only)

Harf taaza nai khushboo mein likha chahta hai
baab ik aur muhabbat ka khula chahta hai
aik lamhay ki tawaju nahi haasil usski
aur ye dil k ussay had se siwa chahta hai

muqawwee123 · February 3, 2014, 12:29pm

Re: Bait Bazi - February 2014 (Parveen Shakir Ashaar only)

Hawa e Tazaa main phir jism o jaan fasaane ka
Dareecha kholen ke hai waqt uske aane ka

kaaf/alif

tarash · February 3, 2014, 5:01pm

Re: Bait Bazi - February 2014 (Parveen Shakir Ashaar only)

Kon chahey ga tumhe meri tarah,
Ab kisi se na mohabbat karna..

kaaf/alif