Re: Bait Bazi - August 2013
***In ajnabi rahon me nahi koi bhi mera,
Kis ney mujhey yon apna kaha tum to nahi ho.
hey/wao
Re: Bait Bazi - August 2013
Weeraan hai maikada kham-o-saaghar udaas haiN
Tum kya gayeh ke rooth gayeh din bahaar ke
kaaf/yeh
Re: Bait Bazi - August 2013
*yeh udaas udaas se bazm-o-dar yeh ujaar ujaar si rahguzar
chalo hum nahin na sahi magar sar-e koo-e yaar koi to ho *
Re: Bait Bazi - August 2013
wo firaq aur wo wisaal kahan
wo shab-o-roz-o-mah-o-saal kahan
Re: Bait Bazi - August 2013
Nerangiy e siyasat,e doraan to dekhiye
manzil ussay mili jo shareek,e safr na thay
Re: Bait Bazi - August 2013
ye kya khela hai ulta khail mray sath qismat nay
sar-e-manzil khara hun or musafat ab bhi baaki hay
Re: Bait Bazi - August 2013
Hum khud sey hain naraz isi bat pey ab tak,
Kiyon hum ney bhulaya hai tera chand sa chehra,
chay/alif
Re: Bait Bazi - August 2013
*Ahsan usko kho ker jeena kaisa hai?
Dil se dharkan minha ker ke deikhoon ga
**
Re: Bait Bazi - August 2013
**Ik pathar idhar aaya hai tu is soach main hon
Meri is shahar main kis kis say shanasai hai
hey/ye**
Re: Bait Bazi - August 2013
yeh kis terha hua ke nazar tou jhuki rahi
aur woh hamaray dil ke sabhi raaz paa gaey
Re: Bait Bazi - August 2013
Ghar walon ko ghaflat per sabhi qauss rahe hain,
Choron ko magar koi malaamat nahin kartaa..
kaaf/alif
Re: Bait Bazi - August 2013
kabhi kisi ko mukammal jahaaN nahi milta..
kaheen zameen kaheen aasmaaN nahi milta
Re: Bait Bazi - August 2013
Mitta Hee Laite Hain Mehroomi-e-Bahaar Ka Gham
Tumhari Bazm Main Phoolon Ka Tazkra Ker Ke
kaaf/yeh
Re: Bait Bazi - August 2013
**Kyun jabr-e-musalsal pe hain khamosh zubanain,
Kya jurrat-e-izhaar-e-hakeekat bhi nahi hai?
**
Re: Bait Bazi - August 2013
ye zindagi sanwarnay jaty ho mana tum
lakin kahiN bheeR main gum ho na jana tum
Re: Bait Bazi - August 2013
Tum na mano magar haqeeqat hai,
Ishq insaan ki zaruurat hai.
Re: Bait Bazi - August 2013
ye zindagi sanwarnay jaty ho mana tum lakin kahiN bheeR main gum ho na jana tum
Tum na mano magar haqeeqat hai, Ishq insaan ki zaruurat hai.
it was supposed to start with "meem"
Re: Bait Bazi - August 2013
it was supposed to start with "meem"
With tay *or *meem. The last word of the sher is 'tum,' and the next sher has to start with either the first or the last letter of the word. I've never done bait bazi this way but, if you look at the previous pages, that's the pattern people on this forum have been following. ^_^
Re: Bait Bazi - August 2013
With tay *or *meem. The last word of the sher is 'tum,' and the next sher has to start with either the first or the last letter of the word. I've never done bait bazi this way but, if you look at the previous pages, that's the pattern people on this forum have been following. ^_^
you are right. we use this rule.. first or last latter of the last word. because most of the time shair ends with 'alif' / 'ye'
Re: Bait Bazi - August 2013
With tay *or *meem. The last word of the sher is 'tum,' and the next sher has to start with either the first or the last letter of the word. I've never done bait bazi this way but, if you look at the previous pages, that's the pattern people on this forum have been following. ^_^
you are right. we use this rule.. first or last latter of the last word. because most of the time shair ends with 'alif' / 'ye'
right i was expecting the usual rule here, thanks for explaining