Bait Bazi----August 2007

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Rules of Bait Bazi:

  1. Shair should be genuine and not your own. Post your own in Bait Bazi — Personal Edition of Sho’ra-e-Gupshup.
  2. Dont break the chain and always follow the last letter of the last posted shair.
  3. Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair.
  4. If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).
  5. Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max will be allowed.
  6. Avoid posting film songs.

Hum dasht thay k darrya hum zeher thay ke amret
nahaq tha za’am hum ko jab woh nahin tha pyasa
“alif”

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Re: Bait Bazi----August 2007

***Aye Ju-e-aab baRh kar ho dariyaa-e-tund-o-tez*** ***Saahil TujhaY ataa ho tau saahiL naa kar qabool **(Iqbal)*
***"Laam"***
MY Wife.........!!
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Re: Bait Bazi----August 2007

Laam ko dhoondhnay laloo khayet jana paRay gha :p


laakhoN ki sunaa tum ne taqadeer saNvaari hai
mujh se yahii kah dete ab ke terii baari hai

"ye"

"Syed zafar shah chisti"

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Re: Bait Bazi----August 2007

Chalo keh detey heiN...aap bhi kya yaad kareiN gi NikamiJi :D

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Re: Bait Bazi----August 2007

lab-e-Khaamosh se izhaar-e-tamannaa chaahe baat karane ko bhii tasviir kaa lahajaa chaahe :halo:
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Re: Bait Bazi----August 2007

Yeh Riida-e-jaan tujhe soonp dooN keh na dhoop tujhey karri lagay..
Kahin dukh naa tujh ko atta karain sar-e-dasht-e-gham ki tamazatein

Noon

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Re: Bait Bazi----August 2007

na jaanay kiouN hai lakin dekhnaY kee tum ko aadat hai **
**meri ye be-wajah aadat chuRa dau phir challay jaana

"Alif"

Announcement
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Re: Bait Bazi----August 2007

Aik khvaab hai is khvab ko khona bhi nahin hai
taabeer ke dhage mein pironaa bhii nahinn haii
liptaa haii mairay dill sey kissii raaz kii suratt..
woh shakhs key jis ko maira hona bhi nahin hai

Yeh

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Re: Bait Bazi----August 2007

youn baton he baton main wo baat bhi ho jai
jis baat main wo baat ho wo baat bhi kar k dekhain !!!

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Re: Bait Bazi----August 2007

Na Naye Rung Se Roye Na Hansay
Koi Fun Bhi To na Aaya Hum Ko

'Wow'

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Re: Bait Bazi----August 2007

vo kaun hai duniyaa meiN jise Gam nahiN hotaa
kis ghaR meiN Khushi hoti hai maatam nahiN hota

"alif"

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Re: Bait Bazi----August 2007

*Aek shakhs mujhey zakhm-e-shanasaai dey gaya
jab dey na saka pyaar to ruswaai dey gaya
*
"Alif"

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Re: Bait Bazi----August 2007

Us ko ghilaf - e - rooh main rakha sanbhal kay
Mohsin wo zakhm bhi to kisi aashna ka tha

"Alif"

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Re: Bait Bazi----August 2007

*Aek hum heiN ke be-barg-o-nawa terey baad
warna aabad hey sab khalq-e-Khuda terey baad
milney waley kai mafhoom pehen ker aa'ey
koi chehra bhi na ankhoN ney parrha terey baad
*
"Daal"

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Re: Bait Bazi----August 2007

Drd ger admi hota to giraybaan paker ker kehtay
Is trha rehtay hain baychain diloon k ander?

"ray"

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Re: Bait Bazi----August 2007

*RastoN mey mat beittho hawa tang karey gi
bhatkey huwey logoN ki sadaa tang karey gi
mat toot ke chaaho usey aaghaaz-e-safar meiN
bichrrey ga to har aek adaa tang karey gi
*
"Ye"

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Re: Bait Bazi----August 2007

Yadoon kay haseen naqsh mitay nahi jatay
Guzaray hoay lamhaat bhulay nahi jatay
Tum laakh karo mohobbat ki naseehat
Jo jaan say piyaray hain bhulay nahi jatay

"yay"

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Re: Bait Bazi----August 2007

*YaadoN ka ik jhoNka aaya hum sey milney barsoN baad
pehley itna roey nahi phir jitna roey barsoN baad
*
"Daal"

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Re: Bait Bazi----August 2007

Diloon main khwahishoon k beej bo ker daikh letay hain
Koi soorat to niklay gi hamaray zinda rehnay ki
"yay"

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Re: Bait Bazi----August 2007

*Ye alag baaat ke afshaN na huwa tu warna
meiN ney kitna tujhey yaad kia terey baad
jaan-e-Mohsin mera haasil ye heiN mubhim satreiN
sheir kehney ka hunar bhool gaya terey baad
*

"Daal"