Re: Bait Bazi — Personal Edition II
Please note that some of you guys are posting aashaar of other poets whereas in ** Bait Bazi — Personal Edition**, only personal creation is permitted. Happy posting :)
Re: Bait Bazi — Personal Edition II
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Re: Bait Bazi — Personal Edition II
yunhi achanak aisy he ik hayal aa gaya .................. jame ulfat tumhein pilaaon ya hud doob
jaon '''''''''''''''''''''''' a sher of my husband
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Na-jaaney qismat ke band saheefoN meiN kon kis ko ataa huwa hey
meiN apni khahish ke kaaghzoN par tera naam likhooN to kesey likhooN!
jo teri nigaahoN ke tamaam rangoN ko bayaaN ka pyara libaas bakhshey
meiN banam-e-hum'dam dhanak ke jesa kalaam likhooN to kesey likhooN!
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"Noon"
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nahi milti teary lehjay ki shabnam
sma'at ab tu mujrjhanay lagi hay
ITs my new shair hopr u like it...
"YAY"
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Rabia it’s very good :k: keep it up 
YaadoN ki kisi bhi gatthri meiN merey khaab chupa kar mat rakhna
in piyaari piyaari aaNkhoN ko saari raat jagaa kar mat rakhna
meiN taara hooN aawaar sa jaaney kis chatt par ruk jaaooN
tum meri khaatir raahoN meiN koi deep jalaa kar mat rakhna
“alif”
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UN ANKHON MAI GHAZAB KI ROSHNI HAY
MERI DUNIA MUNAWWAR HO RAHI HAY
next word is "YAY"
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Ye zara zara si baat par tarha tarha ke aazaab kiuN!
jo kisi sey bhi khafa na ho mujhey us khuda ki talaash hey
"Ye"
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YEHI ANDAZ E MOHABBAT HAY US KA??
MERAY HASaR MAI REHNA,GURAIZ BHI KERNA
next is :ALIF:
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Assalam O Alaikum All members
Ashkon ko palkon main chupaay rakhna
muskurahaton ko labon pay sajaay rakhna
Dukhon ko dharkanon main doboaay rakhna
baywafa ki yaadon ki baraat ko dufnaay rakhna
Alif
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Very nice :k:
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ik umr ka hasil hay
ye dard ,ye tanhaye
"YAY"
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"Ye"
simply beautiful AMAL...i wanna say that u have brilliant approach in poetry
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Yay kaisi dunia hai yahan kay kaisay hain log yarab
budduain, duaon main badal laytay hain daikh laytain hain jub
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Bay
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"Bay"
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kiya ''bay bay" ?
bakri wala...?
ya ammi wala...?
haha
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bohat daer hogai hey tumhein dekhy huy
aao, phir se meri aankhon ko baseerah de do
bohat din huy tumhein hamary gher aaye
ab phir aao aur mujhy zeera de do
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Thanx very much Gul and rabia :~)
Wo khayal tha koi dhanak-numa ya koi aks tha merey ru'baru
jo mujhey har taraf sey tu laga wo tu hi tha ya koi hu-bahu!
**bayaaN meiN thi wo chaashni ke mehak raha tha harf harf
jesey khushbuoN ki zubaan meiN koi kar raha ho guftagu
"Wao"
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