Bait Bazi â€” I-2006

being_lonely · April 27, 2006, 10:19am

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

AKSAR APNE QAD O KAAMAT SE BARI LAGTI HO TUM
CHAAOON BHI LAGTI HO TUMM,DEEWAAR BHI LAGTI HO TUM
KITNI SAADA KITNI GUM SUM APNE HAR ANDAAZ MAIN
SHEHAR KI HOTAY HUAY BHI GAAON KI LAGTI HO TUM
(m)

Precious_Khan · April 27, 2006, 10:27am

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

Mujh ko paana hay tou phir mujh main uter kar daikho
Youn kinaaray say samandar naheen daikha jaataa

Alif

farooqahmad · April 27, 2006, 10:31am

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

aa'o ik saj'da kareN aalam-e-mad'hoshi meiN
loag kehtay heiN k Saghar ko khuda yad nahiN

noon

Precious_Khan · April 27, 2006, 10:49am

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

Nayrang'e siyaasat e doraa'n toy daikhiyay
Manzil unhain mili jo shareek e safar na thay

Yay

mirabbas · April 27, 2006, 1:35pm

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

Ye saara jism jhuk kar bojh se duhra hua hoga
mein sajde mein nahi tha aap ko dhoka hua hoga

gazab ye hai ki apni maut ki aahat nahi sunte
wo sab ke sab parishaan hai wahaan par kya hua hoga

rabia_rana · April 27, 2006, 3:10pm

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

ass ki bat hon kay sans ada
yeh bahanay hain toot janay ko

being_lonely · April 27, 2006, 4:00pm

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

WAADA KAR K GAYE THAY AAYEN GE KHWAAB MAIN
MAARAY KHUSHI K NEEND NA AAYE TO KYA KARAIN:)

mirabbas · April 27, 2006, 4:42pm

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

Na hoga yak bayabaan maandagi se zauq kam mera
hubaab-e-mauj-e-raftaar hai naqsh-e-qadam mera

Mirza Ghalib

rabia_rana · April 27, 2006, 10:03pm

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

apnay aibon pay nazar jin ki nahi hoti hai
aiina un ko dikhatay hain zamanay walay

sara_farooqui · April 28, 2006, 4:51am

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

Yeh nayi ehtiyat dekhi hai
Aiyne se hijab kertey hoo

(Adam)

Precious_Khan · April 28, 2006, 10:06am

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

Wahi ahl e kaarvaa'n hain wahi bay hisi ka aalam
Na kissi ko fikr e manzil ,na ghum e shikasta paa'ee

yay

mirabbas · April 28, 2006, 11:14am

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

Yun agar ho tu jahaan mein koee kaafi na rahe
mojzaa tere waade ka wafa ho jaana

ahl-e-dil se ye tera tark-e-ta'alluq
waqt se pehle aseeron ka riha ho jaana

Qateel Shifai

Precious_Khan · April 28, 2006, 11:40am

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

Aataa hay daagh e hasrat e dil kaa shumaar yaad
Mujh say mairay gunah ka hisaab ay khuda na maang

~Ghalib~

gaaf

mirabbas · April 28, 2006, 12:08pm

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

Ghabra ke marna jaye tu phir aur kya kare
wo shaqs jiske ghar mein koee aeena na ho

iss namuraad dil ke taqaze ajeeb hain
barsat ho bahar ho kaali ghata na ho

rabia_rana · April 28, 2006, 1:05pm

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

Oaj Per Hai Kamal E Behumri
Kin Bakamalon Mai Ghir Gaya Hn Mai

Althea · April 29, 2006, 3:42am

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

^ not entirely clear ... but am assuming the prev sher ends with "mein" ...
though rabia ... you should have written one starting with "wao" since mirabbas ended with wao ....

**nahin nigah mein manzil to justju hi sahi **
nahin visaal mayassar to arzoo hi sahi

"ye"

mirabbas · April 29, 2006, 6:57am

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

Ye sabzah'mand-e-chaman hai jo lah'lahaa na sake
wo gul hai zakhm-e-baharaan jo muskura na sake

ghate agar tu bas ik musht-e-khaak hai insaan
barhe tu vus'at-e-kaunain mein samaa na sake

Jigar muradabadi

system · April 29, 2006, 1:30pm

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

ye he ishq ka hi awal ye he ishq ka aakhir
kahin khud se khud gayab khain khud se khud haazir
pas-e-manzar-o-musaafir ye safar hi khud se khud tak
jo pohanch gya manzil jo reh gya woh musaafir

mirabbas · April 29, 2006, 4:50pm

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

Rahega saath tera pyaar zindagi bankar
ye aur baat meri zindagi wafa na kare

ye theek hai nahi marta koee judaee mein
khuda kisi ko kisi se magar juda na kare

Qateel shifai

Althea · April 29, 2006, 11:58pm

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

^ mashallah ...

yaad kya dast-e-hunar hai ke sanvarta gaya mein
uss ko socha to usse yaad he karta gaya mein

iss ko tahazeeb-e-junoon kahiye ke mujh se pehle
jaise bikhre hein sabhi log bikharta gaya mein

"noon"