re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition
YaadoN kay dareechaY maiN Gulaab-O-Saman haiN
Saath par unn kaY, kaaNToN kaY per-hun haiN
"NOON"
re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition
Neend is Sooch say Tuti Aksar
Kis Tarhaan Katiti Hein Raatein us Ki
Door Raeh Kar Bhi Sada Rahti Hay
Mujh Ko Thaamay Howay Baahein us ki
"Ye"
re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition
YA RAB! MERAY SUKON KO WO IZTARAB DE......................
JO ISHQ KO JUNOON K QALIB MAI DHAL DE..................
IK MAUJ E BEQRAR UTHAY DIL SE IS TRHAN.............
MAHROMIYON KO ANKHON K RASTAY NIKAL DE................
"YAY"
re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition
Buhat Umda Rabia:)
re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition
YA RAB! MERAY SUKON KO WO IZTARAB DE...................... JO ISHQ KO JUNOON K QALIB MAI DHAL DE.................. IK MAUJ E BEQRAR UTHAY DIL SE IS TRHAN............. MAHROMIYON KO ANKHON K RASTAY NIKAL DE................
"YAY"
Rabia this is something outstanding. Though I am very confused that it's too mature and perfect to be yours. If it is really your own work, than time to salute you :)
re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition
Rabia this is something outstanding. Though I am very confused that it's too mature and perfect to be yours. If it is really your own work, than time to salute you :)
thanx Goodnews n Amal.............
jee han Amal ye mera apna kam hai 100 prcnt.............or mazay ki bat ye kay ye shair bait bazi ka forum check krtay huay last word daikh kr he zahan mai aya...:)
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thanx Goodnews n Amal............. jee han Amal ye mera apna kam hai 100 prcnt.............or mazay ki bat ye kay ye shair bait bazi ka forum check krtay huay last word daikh kr he zahan mai aya...:)
4 lines main mekhana loot kar lay gay ... or hum rahay pyase ke pyase :(
re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition
Rabia this is something outstanding. Though I am very confused that it's too mature and perfect to be yours. If it is really your own work, than time to salute you :)
am confused too Aymal and i do same thing u said but this sheR is already in my dairy :)
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4 lines main mekhana loot kar lay gay ... or hum rahay pyase ke pyase :(
ap a gaye :) ..Jee aya noo:D
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ye tu aur hi koi rastay, ye tu aur hi koi munzlain
mayri aankh ager num si ho, mayray hamsufer gila na kur
"ray"
re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition
Ky baat hey Amjad bhai…
aa gaey O tey chaa gaey O 
re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition
:D , shukriya!
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ye kia kah rhay hain app?? aisa kch nhi hai ap pani diary check krain mukhtalif shair hoga zameen milti julti hoskti hai…plz chk it…
re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition
wow agg GS pai kooon aayah hai …
hi rabia how r u ? after a long tim ..u back in GS 
re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition
rabia ji kay paaey ka aur koi sha’eir nahin daikha main nain GS par…
kaya baat hai :k:
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ye tu aur hi koi rastay, ye tu aur hi koi munzlain mayri aankh ager num si ho, mayray hamsufer gila na kur
"ray"
raat chai hai meri zindagi ki rahon mai...........
aa bhi ja taa'k ujalay ki koi aas tu ho...........
re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition
Wese Buhat Si Khaas Batain Ap Main Mojuud Hai
Magar Jo Khas-ul-Khas Hai, Hai Muskurahat Aapki
'Ye'
re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition
Wese Buhat Si Khaas Batain Ap Main Mojuud Hai Magar Jo Khas-ul-Khas Hai, Hai Muskurahat Aapki
'Ye'
nice..............
ye nhi k sirf to ne ho mujh ko apnaya.............
meary ander bhi teray jaisa koi rahta hai........
*** yay***
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Awesome…
maree baat kar rahay thay na???
re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition
ye jaan lo k tum rehtey ho meri sansoon main
is sey barh k main kiya apni muhabbat ka subbot doon