Bait Baazi — Personal Edition

Gujjar_Badshah · May 25, 2009, 4:39pm

re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition

Hatho ki lakeero pe bharosa nahi kerna kiu ke
takdeer to un ki bhi hua kerti hai jin ke haath nahi hote.

:)

tubassam · August 2, 2009, 10:00am

ye warq warq hai teri dastan, ye sabaq sabaq tere tazkire.

main karun to kese karun alag tujhe zindagi ki kitab se?

redidentity · August 6, 2009, 4:12pm

re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition

Ye Naam Ye Maqaam Ye Pakeezgi-e-Rooh
Mujh Ko Hui Naseeb Darbaar Se Teray

(Ahmer)

'Ye'

system · August 19, 2009, 5:34am

re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition

Yeh Tairay Naaz Ka Alam Tha
Mujh Ko Bhi Kah dia "Tum Koun Ho"

terray_naam · August 21, 2009, 4:31am

re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition

Wo saanp se bhi khatarnak admi ho ga
jo dil se dil to malahe nazar mila na sake

ye

system · August 21, 2009, 11:59am

re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition

Youn Nah Khafa Ho iss Khanabadosh Say
Kah Phir Loot Kar Mosam wapus Nahin Aatay

"ye"

bellacullen · August 25, 2009, 10:46pm

re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition

ye theek hai k teri bhi neendain ujar gain
tujh se bechar k hum se bhi soya nahi gaya

"alif"

Sannan · September 2, 2009, 10:32am

re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition

It it your own Sha'r Bella ??????

KKF · September 6, 2009, 10:21pm

**
nice she'r Bela Ji

aalaam-e-roz_gaar ko aasaaN banaa diyaa
jo Gham huaa use Gham-e-jaanaaN banaa diyaa

AsGhar Husain "AsGhar" GonDvii

Harf "alif" se she'r marHamat farmaaiye, plz!**

SUASSHAH · November 15, 2009, 11:43pm

re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition

*Abhi soraj nhi dooba zara si SHAM hony do, *
*Main khod hi lout jaonga mjhe NAKAM hony do, *

*Mjhe badnaam krny k BAHANY dhundty ho Q? *
*Mai khud ho jaonga BadNam pehly nam hony do, *

*Abhi mujh ko nhi krna he Atiraf_e_SHIKAST.. *
*Main sb taslem krlunga ye charcha AAM hony do, *

*Meri HASTI nhi anmol phr bhi bik nhi skta, *
*Wafain bech lena par zra NELAM hony do, *

Naye aghaz main hi hosla Q torh bethy ho, **
**Jet jaogy tm SuB KUCH zara anjam hony do.

** " waw "**

SUASSHAH · November 22, 2009, 4:05am

re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition

Wo bewafa na tha yunhi badnam ho gaya
hazaro chahne wale thay kis kis se wafa karta

        " Alif "

rabia_rana · January 6, 2010, 7:19pm

re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition

ab teri yaad bhi nhi ati....
ab teri arzoo nhi baqi....

Rabab · January 13, 2010, 5:22am

re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition

Ek Ajab Cha'al Chal Gaya Rasta
Chaltay Chaltay Badal Gaya Rasta
Asma'n Tha Meri Nigahon main
Pao'n Say Jab Nikal Gaya Rasta

rabia_rana · February 1, 2010, 9:39am

re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition

asmano'n se laut ie hon...
meri tarjeh badal gya rasta :)

system · February 3, 2010, 8:15am

re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition

Ek Aas He to thi teray millankey
leekan aab millan howa tou Aas totnay kay baad

"dal"

rabia_rana · March 7, 2010, 3:28pm

re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition

dil meray bus mai ab nhi rehta...
kis kharabay mai tu ne daal dia...

Alif

Amal · March 19, 2010, 2:47pm

**Apni maaNgi huwi duwaanoN sey mooN morr liya
khud apney jazbaat ko kar diya paraaya meiN ney
dhoop nikli hey mujhey dhooNdney to chupna kesa!
bas yehi soch kar khud chorr diya saaya meiN ney

"Ye"
**

Sugarfly · May 16, 2010, 6:49pm

re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition

Yeh oor baat kay hum hosh main nahien rehtay
Manzar e akher e shub sir e sham uth'r ata hay

Hay*

Amarbail · July 2, 2010, 9:21pm

re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition

I guess it should be "Ye" ...

Yun tu har shaam guzar jaati hai tere intezaar mein
Aaj kuch khaas baat hai jo shaam hote hi palkain bheeg gaeen ...

"Noon"

Azad · July 7, 2010, 12:00pm

re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition

Na tum na hum na tanhaii hay
jane Q phir se aankh bhar aai hay

adab arz