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Azad~ tujh se to abad yeh mekhana hay
Suna hay zindagi bhi aik payma'naa hay
tu Jonoon kay josh main mad'hosh raho
Roz e mehshar to subb nay u'tt jana hay
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Yeh oor baat kay hum hosh main nahien rehtay
Manzar e akher e shub sir e sham uth'r ata hay
Jam to bohut hain chalakte howe mekhane main
Chalak'na nigaah e naaz ka, roz yaad ata hay
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Ye kiyaa ke sab se bayaan dil kii haalaten karanii !!!!! (¨·.·´¨) ·.¸(¨
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Ye kiyaa ke sab se bayaan dil kii haalaten karanii
'Faraz' tujh ko na aa-iin muhabbaten karanii
Ye log kaise magar dushmanii nibhaaten hain
Hamiin ko raas na aa-iin muhabbaten karanii
POET "AHMED FARAZ"
I HAVE A REQUEST PLEASE STOP PASSING STUPID COMMENTS...
THANKS
MASHAM SHAH !!!! (¨`·.·´¨)
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re: Bait Baazi — Personal Edition
err… this section is for your own poetry.
if you want to post somone else’s poetry, go to poet 1 forum. they have a similar sticky down there.
i guess this would count as a stupid comment 
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hummm
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Haath pe kanta chubhnay se ansoo niklay
pooch haal os kali ka , jis ko weraan kiya
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Apna Aap Ganwa Deta Hoon
Teray Naghmay Gaa Leta Hoon
'Noon'
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na janey kiyoon girtey patoun ko daikh kar khayaal aa ta hay
kisi ka dil tour ker, kia tum ko bhi kabhi mallaal aa ta hay
ye
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youn diloon say kheel kay ab acha lagnay laga hai
manoo zakhmay dil par marham sa lagnay laga hai
ye
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^ I hope you would have found the Edit button by now :~)
Ye duwaaeiN saari ye sadaaeiN saari, ye man'natoN ke chiraagh saarey inhey rah'guzar meiN saja ke har shab, tu kis ko takta hey be'khudi meiN!
"Noon"
Nazar Udaas Haiy Aur Dil Main Khalfishar Sa Haiy
Yeh Lag Raha Haiy Humain Bhi Kisi Say Pyar Sa Haiy
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Jabb Chand Bhi Nahee Tha Amawas Ki Raat Main
Tanha Tumhari Yaad Main Hum Raat Bhar Jaly
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ye kia chal raha hai :ASA:
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yaad tujhey kiya kartey they subah sham kabhi ab wo yaad e maaazi Azzaab ban gayee hey
Yaad Aiey To Yaad Mat Karna **
** Khwahishon Ko Abad Mat Karna
** Hasty Hasty Guzaar Lo Kuch Din**
** Tum Yeh Hasti Azaab Mat Karna**
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** Yaad Aiey To Yaad Mat Karna ** ** Khwahishon Ko Abad Mat Karna** ** Hasty Hasty Guzaar Lo Kuch Din** ** Tum Yeh Hasti Azaab Mat Karna**
Yaad Aao'n tu Yaad ker Laina
Khwahison Ko Abad Ker Laina
Apnii Ankhon men tum saja key Mugh ko
Khawab Apney Nayab Ker laina
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Itni Narmi Se Teri Yaad Mujhe Chhooti Hai
Jese Titli Kisi Phool Pe Per Tolti Hai
'Ye'
(Ahmer)
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Itni Narmi Se Teri Yaad Mujhe Chhooti Hai Jese Titli Kisi Phool Pe Per Tolti Hai
'Ye'
(Ahmer)
Funny...
Per tolna ka Matlab Jhapatna hota hey.....(like attack), try like
Itnii narmii sey terii yaad mughey chotii hai
Jaisey Titlii kisii phool sey kertii hey Qalam
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dear.. kabhi titli ko phool pe per toltay dekha hai aap ne?
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yaadain zeast ka sarmaya hain
yadown ko hamraaz banaow gay
babar jab door kahein jaow gay
bahout yaad oon ko aaow gay
''ye''
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dear.. kabhi titli ko phool pe per toltay dekha hai aap ne?
Nahii, men is Nazarey sey raha Mehroom.......
I had no intentions to hurt you, I am sorry if I did..........But I would insist that "per tolan" is not used in a positive sense.