Bait Baazi New Edition

being_lonely · February 23, 2009, 3:55am

Asalam-u-Alaikum !

How are you my friendz hope fine ! So I am starting this new Bait Baazi Edition in which we “PICK ANY WORD FROM SHER” and post the next sher using that word !
For example:

Dil Ke Dariyaa Ko Kisii Roz Utar Jaanaa Hai
Itna Be-smit Na Chal Laut Ke Ghar Janaa Hai

Woh Aks Ban Ke Mri Chashm-e-Tar Mein Rehta Hai
Ajeeb Shakhs Hai Paani Ke Ghar Mein Rehta Hai

Rules of Bait Bazi:

Shair should be genuine and not your own. Post your own in Bait Bazi — Personal Edition of Sho’ra-e-Gupshup.
Dont break the chain and always mention/highlight the chosen letter from the last posted shair.
If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).
Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max will be allowed.

Shab-e-Hijar · February 23, 2009, 4:13am

inhi patharoo'n par chal kar asakoo to aoo meray ghar kay rastay mai koi kehkishaan nahi hai

being_lonely · February 23, 2009, 4:23am

Re: Bait Baazi New Edition

Wo **kehkashaaN**-zaad o sail-e-nikhat hamaare hamraah chal parra tha Kahan tha varna hamein gavaara, kabhi samandar kabhi sitaara

redidentity · February 23, 2009, 4:56am

Re: Bait Baazi New Edition

Wo Teray Naseeb Ki Barishain Kisi Aur Chhat Pe Baras Gaeen
Dil-e-Be'Khabar Meri Baat Sunn, Usay Bhool Ja Usay Bhool Ja

Shab-e-Hijar · February 23, 2009, 4:59am

Ik shakhs ke kho janay ka dar kiyun nahin jata
Ye bhoj mere dil say utar kiyun nahin jata
Manzil pe puhanch kar usay khona pare ga
Ye tay hai to phir shauq-e-safar kiyun nahin jata

being_lonely · February 23, 2009, 11:23pm

Re: Bait Baazi New Edition

Ab Bhi Ojhal Hai Nighahon Se Nishaan-e-**Manzil** Zindagi Tu He Bata Kitna Safar Baaki Hai

Heiress1 · February 23, 2009, 11:34pm

Re: Bait Baazi New Edition

Main ittifaqan tumhaaray milnay ko
ZINDAGI ka hasool kehta hoon

being_lonely · February 23, 2009, 11:58pm

Re: Bait Baazi New Edition

**Tumhare** Khat Mein Naya Ik Salam Kis Ka Tha Na Tha Raqiib To AaKhir Wo Naam Kis Ka Tha

redidentity · February 24, 2009, 4:48am

Re: Bait Baazi New Edition

Kis Kis Ki Zubaan Roknay Jaun Teri Khatir
Kis Kis Ki Tabahi Main Tera Haath Nahin Hai

poetry_lover · February 24, 2009, 11:06am

Re: Bait Baazi New Edition

kuchh nahii.n to yahii benaam saa bandhan hotaa
kaash mai.n tere hasiin haath kaa kangan hotaa

Shab-e-Hijar · February 25, 2009, 6:17am

haath uthe hain magar lab pe duaa koi nahi
kii ibaadat bhii vo jis kii jazaa koi nahin

redidentity · February 25, 2009, 7:03am

Re: Bait Baazi New Edition

Hum Duaa Likhtay Rahay, Wo Dagha Parhtay Rahay
Aik Nuqtay Ne Humain, Mehram Se Mujrim Ker Dia

being_lonely · February 26, 2009, 2:57pm

Re: Bait Baazi New Edition

**ham** to hain parades mein, des mein nikalaa hogaa chaa.Nd apnii raat kii chhat par kitanaa tanahaa hogaa chaa.Nd

Heiress1 · February 26, 2009, 7:20pm

Re: Bait Baazi New Edition

Barrh kay main rok doon raftaar-e-seher aaj ki RAAT
Roz aatay hain kahan aap ke jaisay mehmaan.........

redidentity · February 27, 2009, 5:41am

Re: Bait Baazi New Edition

Aakhir Huay Na Hazrat-e-Dil Aap Waan Zaleel
Haan Aur Daur Daur Ke Mehmaan Jaa'eay

Shumaisa · February 28, 2009, 4:59pm

Re: Bait Baazi New Edition

Maire saath tum bhii dua karro yun kissi ke haq mein burra Na ho
kaheen aurr ho naa yehh haadsa koii raastay mein judaaa na ho

being_lonely · March 1, 2009, 8:35pm

Re: Bait Baazi New Edition

**Koi **adaa shanaas-e-muhabbat hameIn bataaye Jo ham ko bhuul jaye Wo kyon ham ko yaad aaye

Shumaisa · March 2, 2009, 8:27am

Re: Bait Baazi New Edition

^ wah wah nice shair.. :p

Rishta Koi bhi ho usse aise nibhaao ke
uss rishte ki dorr zindagi bhar na toote

zunerha · March 2, 2009, 9:55pm

Re: Bait Baazi New Edition

Jitna chahte hai hum aapko
itna* koi *nehi chah paye ga
dehkte to honge aapko bohut
par nazar humari *koi *kahan se laye ga!

being_lonely · March 3, 2009, 9:44pm

Re: Bait Baazi New Edition

Pech rakhte ho **bohat** saaj-o-dastaar ke biich Main ne sar girtay hue dekhe hain baazaar ke biich