Rules of Bait Bazi:
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Shair should be genuine and not your own.
— > Post your own in Bait Bazi — Personal Edition of Sho’ra-e-Gupshup.
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Dont break the chain and always follow the last letter of the last posted shair.
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Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair.
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If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).
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Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max will be allowed.
Last shair was posted by P_G
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YE KIA HUWA KAY BHARE ASMAAN KAY ANGAN SE
BICHAR GAYA JO SITARA HAMARE NAAM KA THA
alif**
Re: Bait Baazi Month Of April 2010
Acha hai dil ke paas rahay paasbaan-e-aqal
lekin kabhi kabhaar isay tanha bhi chhor de
'Ye'
Yeh Dil K jUdaaii Key Unwaan Pey BarsOn Sey
ChUp Tha tO bOht Chup Tha rOya tO bOht rOya
'Alif'
Re: Bait Baazi Month Of April 2010
Ab Umer Ho Gayi Hai Dil Ki Kitab Mein
Kuch Khusk Patton K Siwa Kuch Nahi Raha
Jazbaat Tamam Kho Gaye Lamhon Ki Dhul Mein
Ab Dil Mein Dharkanon K Siwa Kuch Nahi Raha.....!!!
"Alif"
Re: Bait Baazi Month Of April 2010
Ay dost aanso'oun se dagh-e-dil kab dhul sakay
Chand mein hai dagh ab bhi kitni barsatoon ke baad...
"Daal"
P_G
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Re: Bait Baazi Month Of April 2010
Do chaar din or hain khuwaboon kay silsilay
phir to mustaqil hain azaaboon k silsilay
Re: Bait Baazi Month Of April 2010
yaan saans ka lena bhi guzar jana hai gi say
yaan marka-e-ishq bhi ik khail tha dil ko
wow
Re: Bait Baazi Month Of April 2010
Wo pal bhar ki narazgiyan aur man bhi jana pal bhar men
ab arshad khud se roothon to kuch log bohat yad ate hen
Noon
Re: Bait Baazi Month Of April 2010
na jany kon duaon mei yad rakhta hai
mei doobta hon sumandar uchal dayta hai
ye
Re: Bait Baazi Month Of April 2010
ye sang dilon ki dunya hay yahan sanbhal k chalna dost
yahan palkon pe bithaea jata hay nazron se giranay k leay
** ye**
Mono
11
Re: Bait Baazi Month Of April 2010
yakein rakhta nahi hoon mein kisi kache taluk par
jo dhaga tootne wala ho us ko tordeta hoon
Re: Bait Baazi Month Of April 2010
nahii.n nigaah me.n manzil to justajuu hii sahii ......
nahii.n visaal mayassar to aarazuu hii sahii ......
Re: Bait Baazi Month Of April 2010
Ye mohabbat bhi aisa raisham he
hath dala he jis ne uljha he
Ye
Amal
14
Re: Bait Baazi Month Of April 2010
YuN urrtey phirtey heiN bhooli hui yaadoN ke warq
dil ke veeraaney meiN patt-jharr ka samaaN ho jaesey
"Ye"
Koyal
15
Re: Bait Baazi Month Of April 2010
ye kia k tujhay bhi hai zamanay se shikaa'yataiN
ye kia k teRi aankhaiN bhi puRnum haiN meRay dost
"tey"
Amal
16
**Raat phir aaey gi, phir zehan ke darwaazey par
koi mehndi meiN rangey haath sey dastak dey ga
"الف"
**
Re: Bait Baazi Month Of April 2010
Aakhir Huay Na Hazrat-e-Dil Aap Waan Zaleel
Haan Aur Daur Daur Ke Mehmaan Ja'eay
'Ye'
Re: Bait Baazi Month Of April 2010
yun to hai azal sai jari shab o rooz ka tasalsul,
teray sath jo din guzray kabhi loot ker naa aii.
ye
Re: Bait Baazi Month Of April 2010
***Yun hi shab-e-faraq me bas ankh lag gai
warna hum aisi raat me sohe kabhi na the
Ye
Amal
20
Re: Bait Baazi Month Of April 2010
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Ye khadsha tha ke mushkil hey, tera laot aana lekin phir bhi
thaam ke haath ummeedoN ka, tehlaatey rahey hum kitni deir
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"Rey"