Rules of Bait Bazi:
Shair should be genuine and not your own. Post your own in Bait Bazi — Personal Edition of Sho’ra-e-Gupshup.
Dont break the chain and always follow the last letter of the last posted shair.
Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair.
If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).
Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max will be allowed.
Avoid posting film songs.
Last SheR
*yaadai'N bhi haiN umeed be hai baybasi bhe hai
aye dost kiya nahi hai humaari nigaah meiN*
“ye”
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Re: Bait Baazi --- March 2007
yaad karte haiN jab wo diN hum aaj bhi
hain kitne tanha teRey biN hum aaj bhi
"ye"
Re: Bait Baazi --- March 2007
yeh mere doston ke haseen qehqahe, hur qadem per naye husen ke chechahey
yaad ban jain ge, mujh ko tarhpain ge, beet`e din uff sitem hum bichar jain gey
ye
Re: Bait Baazi --- March 2007
ye na thi hamri qismat kay visal-e-yar hota
gar aur zinda rahtay yehi intazaar hota
alif
Re: Bait Baazi --- March 2007
agar wo rothay to karta hoon minnaten us ki
mgr main rothon to.. wo kab mujhe manata hay ...
alif .
Re: Bait Baazi --- March 2007
ae nou amooz-e-fanaa, himmat-e-dushwar pasand
sakhat mushqil hai kay ye kaam bhi asaaN niklaa (ghalib)
"alif"
Re: Bait Baazi --- March 2007
Ik amarat kya bani, matti ka sondha ban geya
ghar ka aangan dab geya, ik farsh ki tameer sey
Ye''
Amal
March 2, 2007, 1:31pm
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Re: Bait Baazi --- March 2007
Ye aur baat ke mumbar pe aa ke kuch na kaheiN
khaamosh log balaa ke khateeb hotey heiN
"Noon"
Re: Bait Baazi --- March 2007
nahi jawaab kaa taalib meraa junooN tujhsey
magar aey kash meiN ye aansoo chuhpa sakoon tujhsey
Ye''
Re: Bait Baazi --- March 2007
Yeh aur baat keh meri ana jata na saki **
**mujhe junon tera her juno'n say barh k raha ...
alif .
Re: Bait Baazi --- March 2007
ab kay hum bichray to shayed kabhi khowabon mien milain
jistarhan sukhay huay phol kitaboon mein milain
aatir
March 3, 2007, 9:14am
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Re: Bait Baazi — March 2007
Naam usi ka naam suwaray sham likha
Shier likha ya khat us ko gumnaam likha
Amal
March 3, 2007, 2:47pm
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Re: Bait Baazi --- March 2007
**
Aye dil terey sakooN se teri ronaqeiN gayeiN
darya ka saara husn hi taughyaaniyooN se tha
**
"Alif"
Re: Bait Baazi --- March 2007
^ nice sheR Aymal
aata hai khayalon meiN meRey kauN ye aksaR
jo mujh ko kisi auR ka honay nahi deta
"alif"
Re: Bait Baazi --- March 2007
isi ehtiyat mai woh raha isi ehtiyaat mai mai'n raha
woh kaha kaha meray sath hai kisi aur ko ya pata na ho
waoo
Re: Bait Baazi --- March 2007
wo paRday ki chilman sey muskura ker dekhna
mujhey unn k yeh irshad na miltay to acha tha...
"alif"
Re: Bait Baazi --- March 2007
ankho say nazar ati hai mujh ko teri aa'hat
tu chahay jaha ho mai tujhay dekh raha ho
;)
Re: Bait Baazi --- March 2007
wo aaye na aaye meRey paas lekiN
shiddat se mujhe uska intezaR to hai
"ye"
Re: Bait Baazi --- March 2007
ye jaantey huwey bhi kiye ja rahi hoon pooja
keh Umr eza-tasaaN tanha guzarni hey
aaoun gi tumsey milney gar muntizar nahi ho
par raah ki sakhtii abhi mujhko sanwarni hey
Ye''
Re: Bait Baazi --- March 2007
*
yun jaan dii wafa mien Qatil tamaar umaR
dil kii adaalato`N mien saza dhoondta raha *