Bait Baazi — Jan. 2007

Re: Bait Baazi — Jan. 2007

ab irada hay keh pathar kay saman poojun ka
takeh ghabra'on tou takra bhi sakoN mar bhi sakoN

Noun

Re: Bait Baazi — Jan. 2007

na thaa kuchh to Khudaa thaa, kuchh na hotaa to Khudaa hotaa
Duboyaa mujh ko hone ne, na hotaa mai.n to kyaa hotaa

Re: Bait Baazi — Jan. 2007

yeh shair abhi main nay likh kar bheja tha aap koi dosra shair likhaien :)

Re: Bait Baazi — Jan. 2007

ooopss .. sorry dear

nazar fareb-e-kazaa khaa ga_ii to kyaa hogaa
hayaat maut se Takaraa ga_ii to kyaa hogaa

na_ii sahar ke bahut log mu.ntazir hai.n magar
na-ii sahar bhii kajalaa ga_ii to kyaa hogaa

Re: Bait Baazi — Jan. 2007

ab tou ghabra ke yeh kehtay hain keh mar jaien gay
mar kay bhi chain na paya tou kidhar ja'ien gay

Re: Bait Baazi — Jan. 2007

:-)

yaaro kisii qaatil se kabhii pyaar na maa.Ngo
apane hii gale ke liye talavaar na maa.Ngo

gir jaaoge tum apane masiihaa kii nazar se
mar kar bhii ilaaj-e-dil-e-biimaar na maa.Ngo

Re: Bait Baazi — Jan. 2007

agar ham thorha sa rule change kar lain aur 2nd last haraf say shair likhaien tou kesa rahay ga kyun keh iss tarah alif aur yea kay elawa kisi shair ki bari hi nahien aati
kya khyal hay

Re: Bait Baazi — Jan. 2007

bhai jaan. ye rule to vo he change kar sakta hai jes ne ye thread start ke hai..we can't change the rules :)

Re: Bait Baazi — Jan. 2007

wo na ho ga tou kya kami ho gi
bas adhoori si zandagi ho gi

Re: Bait Baazi — Jan. 2007

ok boss
i'm new thats why mujhay in baton ka andaza nahien hay

Re: Bait Baazi — Jan. 2007

ye aarazuu hai ki jab bhii gale lagaa_uu.N use
hisaar-e-zaat se baahar nikaal laa_uu.N use

Re: Bait Baazi — Jan. 2007

ye hi nahin kai mera dil hi merey bas main na tha
jo too mila tou khud apni dastars main na tha
ajab sehar ka aalam tha us ki qurbat main
woh merey pass tha aur meri dastars main na tha

Re: Bait Baazi — Jan. 2007

Nikmiiiiiiii :blush:

aa_ii na phir nazar kahii.n jaane kidhar ga_ii
un tak to saath gardish-e-shaam-o-sahar ga_ii

kuchh itanaa besabaat thaa har jalvaa-e-hayaat
lauT aa_ii zaKhm khaa ke jidhar bhii nazar ga_ii

Re: Bait Baazi — Jan. 2007

yeh hadsa bhi muhabat main bar ha guzra
keh us nay haal bhi poocha tou aankh bhar aai

Re: Bait Baazi — Jan. 2007

yon hi dukh kisi ko daina nahin theek warna kehta
k meray udoo ko ya rub milay meri zindagani

ye

Re: Bait Baazi — Jan. 2007

yeh maunjza bhi muhabat kabhi dikha'y mujhay
keh sang tujh pe uthay aur zakham aa'y mujhay

Re: Bait Baazi — Jan. 2007

Yoon andheri raat mey ay chaand tu chamka na ker
hasher ik seemi baden ki yaad mein barpa na ker

Rey

Re: Bait Baazi — Jan. 2007

Raat ki aat na karna k kaesi kat'tii hey
shaam ki baat bhi chohrro ke kaesey dhalti hey
jisko aana thaa akhir wuh reh geya hey kahaN
umeed ho ke pareshaaN haath malti hey

Ye''

Re: Bait Baazi — Jan. 2007

yahan tu shokhiyon ko apni zaibaiee se matlab hey
lahoo mein bhi machalna or hina ke saath bhi rehna

Alif

Re: Bait Baazi — Jan. 2007

aay meray kuch na sochnay walay
apnay baray main kuch tou socha kar

ray