Badal jatay tu acha tha

[LP]

Samay kay sath gar hum bhi
badal jatay tu acha tha…
Bohat arman thay dil mein
nikal jatay tu acha tha…
Na sheeshey ke hi rah paye
na pathar kay hi ho paye…
Kisi achay se sanchay mein
jo dhal jatay tu achcha tha…
Giray tu yun giray pee kar
Giraya sab ne nazaron se…
zara sa larkhara kar hi
sambhal jatay tu acha tha…
Woh hum se aise roothey hain
kay hum ander se tootey hain…
Kisi bachay ki manind hi
machal jatay tu acha tha…
Safar mein ho koi sathi
tu asani si rehti hai…
Akelaypan kay Zalim pal
jo tal jate to acha tha

[KKF]

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@LP

samai ke saath gar hum bhii badal jaate to achchhaa thaa.
bahot armaan the dil meN, nikal jaate to achchhaa thaa

na sheeshe ke hii rah paaye, na patthar ke hii ho paaye
kisii achchhe se saaNche meN jo Dhal jaate to achchhaa thaa

gire to yuN gire pee kar giraaya sab ne nazroN se
zaraa saa laRkhaRaa kar hii sambhal jaate to achchhaa thaa

voh hum se aise rooThe haiN k hum ander se TooTe haiN
kisii bachche kii maanind hii machal jaate to achchhaa thaa

safar meN ho koii saathii to aasaanii sii rehtii hai
akelepan ke zaalim pal jo tal jaate to achchhaa thaa

bahot 'umda Ghazal se aapne hameN maHzooz karvaayaa jiske liye ham teh-e-dil se aapke shukr-guzaar haiN.

is Ghazal ko is gaane kii dhun par dil hii dil meN gungunaa kar lutf do-baalaa ho gayaa…vo gaanaa bhii mulaaHizah farmaa lijiiye:
**
na miltaa Gham to barbaadii ke afsaane kahaaN jaate
agar dunyaa chaman hotii to veeraane kahaaN jaate!**

[LP]

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Thank you :)

[KKF]

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are, gaanaa pasand aayaa?

[Sehr_shah]

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bht kh00b...

[LP]

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@KKF

are, gaanaa pasand aayaa?

Not really

@Sehr_shah

bht kh00b…

Thank you

[KKF]

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@LP

Not really

Thank you

gaane ke bol pasand nahiiN aaye? lagtaa hai aap bhii naii cheezoN kii dildaadah haiN…are baba:

“old is ALWAYS gold”.

[LP]

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@KKF

gaane ke bol pasand nahiiN aaye? lagtaa hai aap bhii naii cheezoN kii dildaadah haiN...are baba:

"old is ALWAYS gold". :)

Uss type k music nai pasand...

[KKF]

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@LP

Uss type k music nai pasand...

voii to...maiN ne shaa'irii par Ghaur farmaane ke liye kahaa thaa! :)

Khair:
**
pasand apnii apnii
Khayaal apnaa apnaa** :)

[LP]

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@KKF

voii to…maiN ne shaa’irii par Ghaur farmaane ke liye kahaa thaa!

Khair:
**
pasand apnii apnii
Khayaal apnaa apnaa**

Itne shor (the music ) mai shayeri pe ghaur kaise krti ?

[KKF]

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@LP

Itne shor (the music ) mai shayeri pe ghaur kaise krti ?

lyric bhii chaspaaN kar duuN kia?

[LP]

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@KKF

lyric bhii chaspaaN kar duuN kia?

Chaspaan ?

[KKF]

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@LP

Chaspaan ?

are baba, vohii post karne ko kahve haiN…

[LP]

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@KKF

are baba, vohii post karne ko kahve haiN…

I think I need sleep. I have no idea what you are saying

[KKF]

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@LP

I think I need sleep. I have no idea what you are saying

haN jii…
**
aaraam baRii shai hai
muNh Dhak ke siye!**

shab-ba-Khair!

[LP]

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[Anjul]

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Chaspa bole toh chipka...ya chhapwana...eg deewar pe poster chaspa (chipka) diya, akhbar mein vigyapan chaspa (chhaap) diya. Daubara mat poochhna...minto fresh khaao..dimaag ki batti jalaao.

[KKF]

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chaspaaN = chipkaa huaa

correct: ishtihaar chaspaaN kar diyaa
incorrect: ishtihaar chaspaaN diyaa

chaspaaN Farsi kaa lafz hai aur iskaa root word hai 'chaspeedan' meaning chipkaanaa

vaise hii jaise:

ravaaN = chaltaa huaa from the root word 'raveedan'
davaaN = dauRtaa huaa from the root word 'daveedan'

now, a phrase:

ravaaN-davaaN = chartaa huaa = jaarii o saarii = continuing

usage: Indian Railway kii 'Fairy Queen' train kaa steam engine 161 saal se aaj bhii ravaaN-davaaN hai :)

did you know that? take a ride if you haven't.

[Anjul]

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Train me das rupaye mein teen milne wali jeeja-saali shayri type koi kitaab se is ghatiya cheez ko post kar ham sabko dasne ke liye shukriya. Agar aap tu ki jagah to ya toh likhte toh achchha tha..ham ye post na hi padte toh achchha tha.

[KKF]

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@Anjul

Train me das rupaye mein teen milne wali jeeja-saali shayri type koi kitaab se is ghatiya cheez ko post kar ham sabko dasne ke liye shukriya. Agar aap tu ki jagah to ya toh likhte toh achchha tha..ham ye post na hi padte toh achchha tha.

is this from ‘Chapter 3’?