Hawaon sa tha wo,badal gaya
jo mene mangi thin ro ro k
duaon sa tha wo,badal gaya
ikk taigh lamha,chand chubhti sa-atain
jafaon sa tha wo,badal gaya
kabhi tha majnu,kabhi sikandar
adaon sa tha wo,badal gaya
ikk kali badli,chand shikasta boondain
ghataon sa tha wo,badal gaya
barfeela lehja,shola nigahen
hawaon sa tha wo,badal gaya
wafa kabhi na badli dekhi
per wafaon sa tha wo,badal gaya???
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**ikk kali badli,chand shikasta boondain
ghataon sa tha wo,badal gaya
great creation shaz...loved reading it
hrr shair maen ik dukhee ahh bastee hae....
you know as a poet where to touch...
bhala laga....khush rahaen....
:)
cheers
sat to friends**
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ایک اچھی کاوش ہے
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**aapke kalaam meN me'yaarii Urdu alfaaz kii faraavaanii hotii hai jo ek Khush aayind baat hai...buraa na maaneN to aap se 'arz karuuN k aapko thoRaa shaa'irii ke qawaa'id o zawaabit se aashnaaii karnii chaahiye...aapke andar salaaHiyat ahi bas koshish jaarii rakhiye aur bahtarii ke liye koshaaN rahiye:
hai mashq-e-suKhan jaarii, chakkii kii mashaqqat bhii
ik turfah tamaashaa hai "Hasrat" kii tabii'at bhii**! :)
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Umda tehreer hey. Keep it up.
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awww thanx saad g…another nick…acha :hinna:
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chalo shukar hai paen :hinna:
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**aapke kalaam meN me'yaarii Urdu alfaaz kii faraavaanii hotii hai jo ek Khush aayind baat hai...buraa na maaneN to aap se 'arz karuuN k aapko thoRaa shaa'irii ke qawaa'id o zawaabit se aashnaaii karnii chaahiye...aapke andar salaaHiyat ahi bas koshish jaarii rakhiye aur bahtarii ke liye koshaaN rahiye:
hai mashq-e-suKhan jaarii, chakkii kii mashaqqat bhii ik turfah tamaashaa hai "Hasrat" kii tabii'at bhii**! :)
kiun bura mano gi paen balkeh acha laga k ap ko jo khami lagi wo point out ker di...next time b wait karun gi :)
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Umda tehreer hey. Keep it up.
thanx.
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Amazing 
Keep it up :cobra:
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thanx ustad-e-mohtaram 