bachhpan ki shairi....

was just going thru some old papers and journals and bohat si cheezein written by me years ago…
i found this ghazal… :rotfl:
thot i’d share it…wrote it years ago…
when i was a bachi…
mazaq nahi uraana koee acha :smash:

Gulzaar-e-hast-o-boo mein
chota sa aik ghar ho
yehi khuda se aik dua hai meri
har bachhe ko bachpan naseeb ho

in bachon se aey zalim
bachpan ka sukoon na chheeno
aey kaash yeh naimat khuda ki
har bachhe ko naseeb ho

har mulk keh itne tukrey ker diye
yeh kya jaane aik hee dunya keh log hein hum
hum sub mil ker saath chalein
koee aesa din naseeb ho

insaan insaan ko dard na pohnchaae
kaash yeh dunya sudher jaye
mein jaanti hoon yeh na-mumkin hai
lekin har dil mein aik umeed ho

har aik keh ghar mein
khushbu’oon ka aangan ho
phhool hoon, titliyaan hon
bazeecha-e-atfaal ho

meri baaqi duaain chaahe
mujhe wapis kerde aey khuda
lekin meri yeh dua
aik baar qubool ho

:rotfl:
dang…my urdu was good back then
:rotfl:
don’t know why i find this funny…par..
bohat achha lag raha hai apni puraani likhi howi cheezein aaj parhna…
wese to yeh ghazal kum our journal zyada lagti hai :halo: par still…
i think i was like..around 12/13 when i wrote this :slight_smile:

is mein se kuch shair mein nikaal chuki hoon wese…they were just to0o00o bachhkaana and stupid! hehe…

our bhi bohat si mileen hein…par unhe parh keh huns huns keh bura haal ho gaya…lolz

aap log bhi apni koee puraani likhi howi cheez share keriye! chaahe ghazal ho…koee aik shair bhi ho..kuch bhi..
maza aata hai parhe mein… :hehe:

Nice thoughts :slight_smile:

When i find things that i wrote years ago, i go to myself, what was i thinking! :hehe: Hey even if it’s not that great, it guarantees you laugh.

thanx sehar baji :hug:

jee :slight_smile:

i agree wiht seher rani:hug::hug:

mee t0o0o0 jaaaniii :hula: :hug: :kiss:

aap log bhi share kero naaaaa :smash: :smash:

pata nahi kahan pare ho gee:bummer:
but promise tum se agar mile to zaror share karo gee:kiss::kiss:

u better :smash: :smash:

:kiss: :hug:

yes janu y not:kiss::hug:
acha come on cafe yahann ziada buk buk nahi kar sakte na:kiss::bummer::smiley:

:rotfl:

i am jaani :bummer: par my net is too slow.. :teary1:
mushkil ho rahi hai :frowning:

humm then do u want me to come and make ur net fast:smokin:

:konfused: jaaani woh kese :bummer:

Re: bachhpan ki shairi…

aakhir bhateeji kiss kee ho:smokin:

that was so nice:k:

aik baat bataao, yeh asha’ar agar buchpann maiN likhay thay tau iss ka matlab ziadah puraanay nahiN haiN:p haiN naa:mocking:?

j/k:hehe:

Re: Re: bachhpan ki shairi…

:hoonh:
i swear i wrote it when when i was 12/13..
ab hisaab lagaain…keh kitne saal pehle howe…and i CUD be talking about pakistan…jis keh halaat saaloon se kharab hein :halo:
and i think keh yeh halaat wali ghazal…u can NEVER say kis zamaane ki hai…
har time period mein DUNYA mein aise halaat kisi na kisi mulq mein zaroor rahein hein…
pakistan mein to kaafi larayee jhagre…firing shiring hoti thi…!
kyuon? agree?
and NO…i am NOT talking about IRAQ :halo:

ps: and when we came from pakistan to canada…pakistan keh halaat kaafi kharab thhe… :wink: i am sure u know is baare mein!

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wohi tau:smokin: ziadah puraani baat nahiN hay naa:blush: yei tau keh rahaa hooN :stuck_out_tongue:

Re: Re: Re: Re: bachhpan ki shairi…

:mad: :mad: YEH BAAAT POORE GS KO BATAANA ZAROORI THI KEH ZYADA PURAANI BAAT NAHI HAI :mad2:
argghhhhh!! :mad:

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sorry:(

^^:hug:

mein ne to aisay he kaha tha:teary1: :snooty:

ohh acha :hug: :kiss:

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better be :smash:

:stuck_out_tongue:

:hehe::kiss: