Babbar Sher

Kuch babbar sher arj hain…

Ki woh bhi kya hassen din hua karte the,jab hum haisnao se gale mila karte the
Yeh un dino ki baat hain doston jab hum 2 saal ke hua karte the.

I dont know whether the following one is crossing the limit.If then please give me 2 warning points and remove it

Ek Toilet ke bahar likha tha
Ek Toilet ke bahar likha tha
yahan bado bado ki nikal jaati hain