DADDU
January 4, 2005, 4:16pm
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door rehna hai ager saamne aate kiyoun ho
girke nazroonse meri aankh milate kiyoun ho
jo na socha tha tumhain tum wohi nikle humdum
dil main nafrat hai to phir piyaar jatate kiyoun ho
waqat ki baat hai kuch bhi na chupey ga tumse
phir haqeeqat ko zamane se chupate kiyoun ho
youn to khud tumne mohabat ko bhula rakha ahi
aaj tum mujhko khata waar banate kioyun ho
jab koi baat nahi jiska humain fakhar rahay
zikar phir piyaar ka mehfil main uthaatey kioyun ho
Re: baat banatey kioun ho
very nice,,,keep it up..
have read a number of posts by u,,,they're always really gud 2 read
DADDU
January 4, 2005, 9:57pm
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Re: baat banatey kioun ho
Thank you dost..
Re: baat banatey kioun ho
door rehna hai ager saamne aate kiyoun ho
girke nazroonse meri aankh milate kiyoun ho
Wah… Very Nice Daddu Gi :k:
Aabi
January 12, 2005, 6:29am
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Re: baat banatey kioun ho
Good DADDU
good collection of ur poetry is present on the GS
It’s nice
Keep it up
DADDU
January 12, 2005, 2:06pm
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Re: baat banatey kioun ho
Thank you dost main jab ON-Line aata hoon tab he koi nayee Ghazal soch kar likh deta hoon in main koi bhi meri purani ghazal nahi hai. aur main har dum koshish karta hoon ke koi nayee cheez naye din likhoon aur inshallah ye he karta rahoonga.....