Baarish

Brijinder · July 20, 2006, 10:05pm

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Swaab si lagi mujhay Us din baarish ki woh fuhaar Jab Meray chayray ka usnay Apnay aaNchal say poNcha paani ----------------------

Sannan · July 21, 2006, 10:48am

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buhat romanvi see shae'ri Bridinder ... good shot

Brijinder · July 21, 2006, 8:10pm

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Thanx a lot for the kind words of appreciation.
brijinder"Sagar"

Sabana · July 21, 2006, 9:00pm

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very tuching

goodnews · July 23, 2006, 8:00am

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Main(Mothers) aksar bachon ki behti nak apny anchal hi sy saf krti hain
Very touchy Mamta phut phut kr nikal rhi hy shyr sy MashaAllah

Brijinder · July 25, 2006, 7:56pm

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I think u wanted to post it somewhere else,goodnews!

goodnews · July 26, 2006, 5:18am

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Mamta ki bat krna yhan mnana hy kia:confused: Ary bhai poetry hamin bhi bhati hy magar kabhi kabhi koi shyr ap tashrih kuch or krty hain hamin tashrih kuch or nazar ati hy number chahy kam milin magar point tu hmatra bhi hy. Shairi ki muhabat apni jga thuri si hisy mazha bhi rakhni chahy, Iqbal ny kia khub kha hy
Acha hy dil k pass rhy pasbany aqal
Lykin kabhi kabhi isy tanha bhi chor dy
So I am the person most of the time pasbany aqal stay away;) don,t be khroos (no hurt feelings)please.

Brijinder · July 26, 2006, 7:30pm

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Ouch!Point taken but still can not apply to myself.I am a person who has a real tacky sense of humour as my friends tell me.I just thought that u posted this message by mistake as i thought u meant this comment for some other poem.I stand corrected .

masoomSiLarki · July 26, 2006, 10:31pm

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[quote=Brijinder]

**Baarish**

[Pochaah ya ponchaah[

Brinjindar bura na manayay ga. Fuhaar naheen phuhaar hota hai.](“Parked Domain name on Hostinger DNS system”)Poncha naheen ](“Parked Domain name on Hostinger DNS system”)

Brijinder · July 27, 2006, 2:08am

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Thanx for pointing it out.I have corrected Phuhaar at many sites but not ponchaah.I donot know how to edit here.Can u suggest?
Thanx once again

goodnews · July 27, 2006, 2:46am

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Man lyty hain tumhara nuqtay nazar drust hu to hu magar
Apna apna zawia nigah hy.

goodnews · July 27, 2006, 2:48am

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Thanks masoomSilarki I was thinking about this but could not understand what is bothring here .Ap ny jmery dimagh ki khrak door kr di shukriya.Fuhaar ko Phuar bta kr wasy Poncha tu thik hi hy, I guess?)

Brijinder · July 29, 2006, 12:12am

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thanx to all of u.Corrections have been made.Am open to suggestion always.

goodnews · July 29, 2006, 12:31am

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Thanks ki zarorat nahi yeh tu hmara awalin farz tha. Magar mujhy tu fuhar hi nazar arha hy abhi tak lagta hy net Fy fuwara sy fuhar bna rha hy phy phuaar ho gi.

charming_gurl · July 29, 2006, 2:03pm

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so nice janab

Muslim_girl_1 · July 29, 2006, 5:12pm

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very romantic!!

Brijinder · July 29, 2006, 8:19pm

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Yes! I am sorry I am unable to edit here as there is no edit button.can u help me?

goodnews · July 29, 2006, 8:42pm

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Wahy Guru, Rab sohna hi teri madad kry, asi wi bybas kuj nahi kr sakdy:teary1:
wasy “Sorry” kithu agai wichy uhdi ty asi koi gal hi nahi kiti;)

Krypton · July 29, 2006, 9:04pm

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niceee

luv baarishh!

Brijinder · July 30, 2006, 8:06pm

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I am thankful to u for the kind words.And the problem about the edit button is still unsolved.Anyone with a suggestion?