~baadalo.n kaa kaafilaa aataa huaa achchhaa lagaa~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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baadalo.n kaa kaafilaa aataa huaa achchhaa lagaa
pyaas kii dharatii ko har saavan ba.Daa achchhaa lagaa

us bharii mahafil me.n us kaa chand lamho.n ke liye
mujh se milanaa baat karanaa dekhanaa achchhaa lagaa

jin kaa sach honaa kisii suurat se bhii mumkin na thaa
aisii aisii baate.n aksar sochanaa achchhaa lagaa

vo to kyaa aataa magar Khush_fahamiyo.n ke saath saath
saarii saarii raat ham ko jaaganaa achchhaa lagaa

pahale pahale to nigaaho.n me.n ko_ii jachataa na thaa
raftaa raftaa duusaraa phir tiisaraa achchhaa lagaa

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Luv this ghazal

thx for sharin Naazi :)

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bohat khoob

kya andaaz hai

ulfat aap chaa gayeeN..seedhi dil ko laggi ja kar THA KAR KAY.

waslaam

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Bohat khoob Nazi.. :k:

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Very Nice Nazi :flower1:

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Nazi Ji,
Nice one

Thank u ji

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HH thx :slight_smile:
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ASN shukariya ji bari nawazish hai apki
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Aryan thx :flower1:
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KoiDost thankoo :slight_smile:
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Saqi ji thanku for ur reply ji :flower1:

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Hmmm
Nice

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phuul the baadal bhii thaa aur vo hasii.n suurat bhii thii

Nazi Ji Paish-e-Khidmat hai:

phuul the baadal bhii thaa aur vo hasii.n suurat bhii thii
dil me.n lekin aur hii ek shaql kii hasarat bhii thii

jo havaa me.n ghar banaaye kaash ko_ii dekhataa
dasht me.n rahate the par taamiir kii aadat bhii thii

kah gayaa mai.n saamane us ke jo dil kaa mudd'a
kuchh to mausam bhii ajab thaa kuchh merii himmat bhii thii

ajanabii shaharo.n me.n rahate umr saarii kaT ga_ii
go zaraa se faasale par ghar kii har raahat bhii thii

kyaa qayaamat hai "Munir" ab yaad bhii aate nahii.n
vo puraane aashnaa jin se hame.n ulfat bhii thii