Ba-sad Naaz - Joun Elia

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
1

Hum ba-sad naaz dil ma basaye bhi gaye
Phir ganwaye bhi gaye aur bhulaye bhi gaye
Hum tera naaz thay phir teri khushi ki khatir
Kar k bechara teray samnay laaye bhi gaye
Hum say rootha bhi gaya hum ko manaya bhi gaya
Phir sabhi naqsh talluq k mitaye bhi gaye
Jama-o-tafreeq thay hum maqtab-e-jism-o-jaan ki
K barhaye bhi gaye aor ghataye bhi gaye
‘Joun’ dil shehr-e-haqeeqat ko ujara bhi gaya
aur phir sheher to “hum” k basaye bhi gaye

2

Re: Ba-sad Naaz - Joun Elia

:lajawab:

3

Re: Ba-sad Naaz - Joun Elia

'Joun' dil shehr-e-haqeeqat ko ujara bhi gaya
aur phir sheher to "hum" k basaye bhi gaye

Can you explain this shair?<!-- google_ad_section_end -->

4

Re: Ba-sad Naaz - Joun Elia

so simple, pehlay dil ka shehar ko ujarra gya phir basya bhi gaya.
ye shayer ka andaaz e laffazi hai "hum" k; mean humary dil ke

5

Re: Ba-sad Naaz - Joun Elia

shayed aap nai LP ko taunt kia hai :stuck_out_tongue: k poori ghazal samjhay begair hi :lajawab: kar dia
:stuck_out_tongue:

6

Re: Ba-sad Naaz - Joun Elia

Thanks. I was confused with this style of poet. Joun Elia was from Bihar Shareef?

7

Re: Ba-sad Naaz - Joun Elia

Elia migrated to karachi from UP

8

Re: Ba-sad Naaz - Joun Elia

:smack: jee nai muqawee ne aisa kuch nahi kiya :emmy:

from uP :hayaa:

9

Re: Ba-sad Naaz - Joun Elia

:cb: nahin ye maine apni kam fehmi ko door karne ke liye poocha tha

10

Re: Ba-sad Naaz - Joun Elia

ye to muqawee khud hi bta sktay hai na :stuck_out_tongue:

:smack:up nai, UP, Utar Pardesh.

11

Re: Ba-sad Naaz - Joun Elia

:smack: i know UP

12

Re: Ba-sad Naaz - Joun Elia

main samjha aap 7up samjhi ho :stuck_out_tongue:

13

Re: Ba-sad Naaz - Joun Elia

I am related to UP myself :snooty: