Re: Azab-e-Mohabat!!!!!!
[q Very nice Aaina love the poem.the last one is a beautiful sheir.can i retouch itl ike this.
un ki ankhon se pee loon aaina
ab mujhe koi bhe sharab na de
hows that?
Ilike your poems .your words are stong enough,keep on writing .
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ote=Aaina Dar]Mujh ko be mosami Gulab na de
Khawab ki Aarr mein Sarab na de
Ranjisheen to ba,ja sahi Lekin
Itni nafrat se to jawab na de
Mera Dast-e-Talab pakar ya chorr
Par umer bhar k liye Azab na de
Wasal ki sham bhi mujay khabhi deekha
Hijar he k hamein Azab na de
Mujhko peena hai onn ki Aankhoon se"Aaina"
Ab mujay koi bhi sharab na de...................!!!!!]
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