Azab-e dill zara kam hoo tu soochain

[Dilsay]

Re: Azab-e dill zara kam hoo tu soochain

achee nazm heye, dilasay. thanks for sharing. one thing about your poem is, when you refer your pen name in it, you do so with a self questioning focus, which is very good and powerful to note. best, Dushwari

Thanks alot Dushwari jee,

Well this is how i write and thanks for tareef ka shukriya