Azab-e dill zara kam hoo tu soochain

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Purani batain zakham apnay apni yadain
Azab-e dill zara kam hoo tu soochain

Tumahari baat agar sach hoo tu kahoo
Mari wazahat agar galat hoo tu soochain

Main wohi hoon jo tere muskorane par khush hoon
Tumaharay liay sitaray behi gar kam hoon tu soochain

Kabhi agar apnay zameer say hoo tari baat
Mari taraf say kahna ke kuch soochain

Piyar ko kamzoori samajahna kam zarfee hai
Dilsay Piyar ko taqat agar samjho tu soochain

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Re: Azab-e dill zara kam hoo tu soochain

nice one dilsay :k:

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Re: Azab-e dill zara kam hoo tu soochain

achee nazm heye, dilasay.
thanks for sharing.
one thing about your poem is, when you refer your pen name in it,
you do so with a self questioning focus, which is very good and powerful to note.
best,
Dushwari

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Re: Azab-e dill zara kam hoo tu soochain

bohut khoob :k:

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Re: Azab-e dill zara kam hoo tu soochain

Thanks alot

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Re: Azab-e dill zara kam hoo tu soochain

Thanks alot Dushwari jee,

Well this is how i write and thanks for tareef ka shukriya

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Re: Azab-e dill zara kam hoo tu soochain

very nice..

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Re: Azab-e dill zara kam hoo tu soochain

Thanks

Galtee hoo gayee

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Re: Azab-e dill zara kam hoo tu soochain

haww khud ko thnx keh dia :$

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Re: Azab-e dill zara kam hoo tu soochain

aap ko karna tha thanks